Lightweight tourny: T.i.v.a vs. Doggy

[M Dogg™]

This is the first round. Battle for the lightweight title.

Here we go... rules:
15-20 bars
I judge
verses due by Monday December 9 at 11:59pm... so all day Monday. Good luck

[Xearo]

Doggy in a LIGHTWEIGHT tournament??

Damn...

LOL

[Doggystylin]

shhh, hush up , im startin keystylin all over, i havent keystyled since last spring so yeah thats why im startin in lightweight cuz i think my rhymes have dropped to lightweight status, and mdogg agrees

[T.i.v.a]

aight_lets_eliminate_one_and_get_on_with_this_shit!

INTRO:

UNDER_UR_NAME_IT_SAYS_MUTHAFUCKIN_DON/
IN_THE_LIGHTWEIGHT_TOURNEY_THATS_A_MUTHAFUCKIN_CON/
UNLESS_U_GOT_CRED_INSTEAD_OF_GETTIN_WHAT_WAS_SUPPOSED_TO_GET_FED/
WELL_I'M_HERE_NOW,_WITH_MY_GAT_OUT/
GARUNTEED_KNOCK_OUT_IN_DIS_FIRST_BOUT.

I'M_GONNA_SPIT_ILL_SHIT_TO_CRUSH_THIS_LIL_PIT/
FUCK_MORE_LIKE_LIL_PUP,LIL_PUNK/
GONNA_PROCEED_TO_FUCK_U_UP/
TRY_TA_DUCK,_NO_LUCK/
KNOCKIN_OUT_THIS_FUCKIN_CHUMP/
USE_YA_FIVE_STARS,_CUT_U_AND_LEAVE_BATTLE_SCARS/_NOT_DONE_WIT_DOGGY,_STILL_BEATIN_WITH_THESE_BATTLE_BARS/_PITBULL,_BULLSHIT/_U_DONT_BITE_U_NIP/
STILL_GOTTA_FULL_CLIP/_UDONE_GETTIN_UR_ASS_WHIPPED?/

DOGGY_JUS_GOT_BLAZED_CUZ_I_JUS_SPIT_FLAME/
ELIMINATE_THIS_FUCKIN_LAME_AND_ADVANCE_MY_NAME!

[Doggystylin]

Oh my god, you seein this rod?/
Only way i can lose is if this gets voted on by mdogg/
Really though, ima murder you with minimum barz/
No one ever heard of u, but u get maximum scarz/
My lyrics are hard like metal,so when i spit at you i put you behind bars/
Your gettin lyrically jumped like hurdells/
I flow at night but you couldnt see me if you were nocturnal/
Im fuckin, so your eggs better be fertile/
Now what do you got? i got the supreme lyrical structure/
I fuck and cut you up like a pussy vein rupture/
Ha you think your gonna advance with caps?/
Please dogg,it just makes you look ignorant, its all in your raps/
Newbie lost his way to failure, well here let me give you some maps/
Perhaps, you should close your account and return later in this game/
Cuz really dogg,i aint even mentioned your name and still put you to shame/


*i dont remember mdogg ever votin for me, so i had to make that line, but with lost angel, its a new deal, were cool

*and i really did only spit minimum bars, lol

thats all, peace

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

4 tha love of god, Somebody call 911....T.i.v.a is just too young to go out like this

[T.i.v.a]

aight keep throwing posts up to sway the vote, i could really give a fuck.

[Doggystylin]

aight keep throwing posts up to sway the vote, i could really give a fuck.

huh? wtf are you moanin about? i freestyled my rhyme in less than 5 mins and just gave a link for my homie to check it out, i didnt tell him to even post, he cant even vote, its all on mdogg

[T.i.v.a]

WASNT EVEN DIRECTED TOWARDS U, AND EXACTLY MDOGG VOTES SO WHAT THE FUCK IS THE POST FOR? MUTHAFUCKA JUST OPEN HIS MOUTH FOR NO REASON.

[Doggystylin]

lmao^^^

[T.i.v.a]

right back at ya dawg!

[Doggystylin]

word

[bLaDe]

LMAO

  -{bLaDe}

[M Dogg™]

I read this battle fairly... here we go.

T.i.v.a.:
The underline thing stood out to me. In a text battle that's good, so nice idea. But in a text battle, it's not about visual, it's about lyricals. Most your lyricals were overdone lyrics that reminded me of stuff M.C. Eiht would have said along time ago, and was hard. Find away to take your style to the next level, and you'll be straight.

Doggy:
You had some good punches, not quite a perfect verse. But in a lightweight tourny, you did better than expected.

So in the end, I'ma have to give it to Doggy, 'cause well T.i.v.a. did pnch hard, it wasn't with much orginallity, and Doggy had some nice lines. Almost made me think he used to ghostwrite for Rod... LOL... OK, maybe not that good.

[Koncept]

'cause well T.i.v.a. did pnch hard

WTF? LMAO