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Promised Land
« on: April 16, 2010, 08:38:37 PM »
Mind stagnant, just a fragment of past self
regrets like the times I fucked up all my wealth
but if I had same situation again, maybe fuck it up again
Cause in this American lifestyle I just can't fuckin win
System against me, for whatever reason
I don't know, I got a million theories, no answers
The shit eats at me like cancer
If I could just use that organ above my two eyes and see
That this just ain't the fuckin place for me
Then maybe I could be more accepting
but instead I try to adapt
when I should just give up and laugh
kiss this cursed land goodbye
and fly to the promised land
Givin' respect to 2pac September 7th-13th The Day Hip-Hop Died

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2010, 12:29:08 PM »
doin it big

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2010, 01:29:52 PM »
Chilling in africa getting butt stretched by a lion
Makes me wonder why fools keep talkin bout zion
Got monkeys and zebras drinking outa the same water as a village
Wonder why no one has ever invaded, what's there to pillage
Whitey already got all the diamonds
While tribesmen feasting on hipppatumus hymens
Birthplace of AIDS, and the west nile
Got babies squeezing water out of a poo pile
Backwards savages beatin on drums
Pickin lice out of the hair of little ones
And that's where you choose to kick it at
I'll stay sippin yak in the air conditioned flat
you can stay hella hot and drink the piss from a bat
 

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2010, 01:39:00 PM »
Mind stagnant, just a fragment of past self
regrets like the times I fucked up all my wealth
but if I had same situation again, maybe fuck it up again
Cause in this American lifestyle I just can't fuckin win
System against me, for whatever reason
I don't know, I got a million theories, no answers
The shit eats at me like cancer
If I could just use that organ above my two eyes and see
That this just ain't the fuckin place for me
Then maybe I could be more accepting
but instead I try to adapt
when I should just give up and laugh
kiss this cursed land goodbye
and fly to the promised land


Chilling in africa getting butt stretched by a lion
Makes me wonder why fools keep talkin bout zion
Got monkeys and zebras drinking outa the same water as a village
Wonder why no one has ever invaded, what's there to pillage
Whitey already got all the diamonds
While tribesmen feasting on hipppatumus hymens
Birthplace of AIDS, and the west nile
Got babies squeezing water out of a poo pile
Backwards savages beatin on drums
Pickin lice out of the hair of little ones
And that's where you choose to kick it at
I'll stay sippin yak in the air conditioned flat
you can stay hella hot and drink the piss from a bat

LOL @ the differences.

This reminds me of that "Positive/Negative" track Necro and Sabac did years ago.
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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2010, 05:50:26 PM »
Chilling in africa getting butt stretched by a lion
Makes me wonder why fools keep talkin bout zion
Got monkeys and zebras drinking outa the same water as a village
Wonder why no one has ever invaded, what's there to pillage
Whitey already got all the diamonds
While tribesmen feasting on hipppatumus hymens
Birthplace of AIDS, and the west nile
Got babies squeezing water out of a poo pile
Backwards savages beatin on drums
Pickin lice out of the hair of little ones
And that's where you choose to kick it at
I'll stay sippin yak in the air conditioned flat
you can stay hella hot and drink the piss from a bat


Ignorant fucks think Africa is just what they see on TV
But television tells-lies-to-your-vision, please believe me
Can't blame you cause you only know the Africa they show
But I hope one day you will mature and grow

Air conditionin is nothin when you in a room wit people frontin
You can get drunk or sstuff but still you really all about nothin
You actin like Africa to you is the discovery channel or somethin?
Violence, kids starvin? but where I been not a soul is bein harmed
There's no homeless on the streets cause love and family fills all needs
And everybody eats cause everyone shares cares with hearts universal
Your only understanding of Africa comes from an African Aid commercial

They got wealth there, beauty, people living more healthy and natural
It ain't what you be eating with your hormones induced cattle
Open yourself up to the world and discover parts of self you never knew
Or just stay an abbreviated and ignorant, decrepit, stingy ass fool
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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 02:39:10 PM »
Mind stagnant, just a fragment of past self
regrets like the times I fucked up all my wealth
but if I had same situation again, maybe fuck it up again
Cause in this American lifestyle I just can't fuckin win
System against me, for whatever reason
I don't know, I got a million theories, no answers
The shit eats at me like cancer
If I could just use that organ above my two eyes and see
That this just ain't the fuckin place for me
Then maybe I could be more accepting
but instead I try to adapt
when I should just give up and laugh
kiss this cursed land goodbye
and fly to the promised land


Jesus fucking christ, you're damn near 30 fucking years old and you still whine like you're in high school.  Boo fucking who the system is against you.  It's not the system its the fact you were a spoiled fuck up from birth.  The only reason life is so hard because you're a fuck up of epic proportions.  Stop blaming the rest of the world and look at yourself in the mirror.
 

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2010, 10:58:09 AM »

Jesus fucking christ, you're damn near 30 fucking years old and you still whine like you're in high school.  Boo fucking who the system is against you.  It's not the system its the fact you were a spoiled fuck up from birth.  The only reason life is so hard because you're a fuck up of epic proportions.  Stop blaming the rest of the world and look at yourself in the mirror.


Fuck up? By whose standards are we talking?
If they ain't my own standards then keep walking
I live on my own terms, nerd! So keep ya neck stiff
Fall in line, and keep sucking up upon others nicca's dick

You didn't understand what I meant you carbon copy
Check your fingerprints, dumbfuck, back up off me
Ain't no two people created same with same conditions
For every single man on Earth this life is different
We all live by the consequences of our own decisions
You can't stay conscious if you tryin to walk in others footprints
Cause honestly dogg this Earth is spread upon continents
diverse cultures and systems so why put yourself in a prison?
Keep your mind sharp like a prism, follow your own vision

Dig in your cleats, meet up with those crossing ya train of thought
Stay true to you, and then you ain't ever lost
Cause what's failure here means success there, hate vs. love
No matter what he does they say he don't do enough
And one may be a hero to some but he's a vilian to the next
So just focus on your quest, do what you do
the fake muthafucka's (like you) gone hate, but the real will stay true
« Last Edit: April 26, 2010, 11:00:09 AM by Infinite... Be and It Is »
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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #7 on: April 26, 2010, 11:53:11 AM »

Jesus fucking christ, you're damn near 30 fucking years old and you still whine like you're in high school.  Boo fucking who the system is against you.  It's not the system its the fact you were a spoiled fuck up from birth.  The only reason life is so hard because you're a fuck up of epic proportions.  Stop blaming the rest of the world and look at yourself in the mirror.


Fuck up? By whose standards are we talking?
If they ain't my own standards then keep walking
I live on my own terms, nerd! So keep ya neck stiff
Fall in line, and keep sucking up upon others nicca's dick

You didn't understand what I meant you carbon copy
Check your fingerprints, dumbfuck, back up off me
Ain't no two people created same with same conditions
For every single man on Earth this life is different
We all live by the consequences of our own decisions
You can't stay conscious if you tryin to walk in others footprints
Cause honestly dogg this Earth is spread upon continents
diverse cultures and systems so why put yourself in a prison?
Keep your mind sharp like a prism, follow your own vision

Dig in your cleats, meet up with those crossing ya train of thought
Stay true to you, and then you ain't ever lost
Cause what's failure here means success there, hate vs. love
No matter what he does they say he don't do enough
And one may be a hero to some but he's a vilian to the next
So just focus on your quest, do what you do
the fake muthafucka's (like you) gone hate, but the real will stay true

damn i didnt think you had it in you to come with an actual rap and not just some spoken word bitch shit. youre still a sensitive whiny fuck up though
 

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #8 on: April 26, 2010, 05:39:50 PM »

Jesus fucking christ, you're damn near 30 fucking years old and you still whine like you're in high school.  Boo fucking who the system is against you.  It's not the system its the fact you were a spoiled fuck up from birth.  The only reason life is so hard because you're a fuck up of epic proportions.  Stop blaming the rest of the world and look at yourself in the mirror.


Fuck up? By whose standards are we talking?
If they ain't my own standards then keep walking
I live on my own terms, nerd! So keep ya neck stiff
Fall in line, and keep sucking up upon others nicca's dick

You didn't understand what I meant you carbon copy
Check your fingerprints, dumbfuck, back up off me
Ain't no two people created same with same conditions
For every single man on Earth this life is different
We all live by the consequences of our own decisions
You can't stay conscious if you tryin to walk in others footprints
Cause honestly dogg this Earth is spread upon continents
diverse cultures and systems so why put yourself in a prison?
Keep your mind sharp like a prism, follow your own vision

Dig in your cleats, meet up with those crossing ya train of thought
Stay true to you, and then you ain't ever lost
Cause what's failure here means success there, hate vs. love
No matter what he does they say he don't do enough
And one may be a hero to some but he's a vilian to the next
So just focus on your quest, do what you do
the fake muthafucka's (like you) gone hate, but the real will stay true

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #9 on: April 27, 2010, 09:55:46 AM »
Why did you delete my post, Brian ?  Couldn't handle the ether bomb dropped on you.  Ight how about a formal battle ?   Or will you delete this post too ?
 

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #10 on: April 27, 2010, 10:26:16 AM »
Why did you delete my post, Brian ?  Couldn't handle the ether bomb dropped on you.  Ight how about a formal battle ?   Or will you delete this post too ?

No, if you want to battle that's fine, because we promote that in this section of the forum.

But we don't promote beef for the sake of beef and just because you don't like some one and want to talk shit on them.  Save your bullshit gossiping, half-truths,and outright lies for the G-Spot.  Straight forward beefing is for the G-Spot forum, not here.  

If you want to come up in here with beef, you have to come on an artistic level or at least be attempting art even if your wack.  Everyone here is familiar with the concept of battlin in hip-hop and you are too, so try not to act stupid like you don't know the proper use of this forum.
« Last Edit: April 27, 2010, 10:29:48 AM by Infinite... Be and It Is »
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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2010, 01:06:17 PM »
Why did you delete my post, Brian ?  Couldn't handle the ether bomb dropped on you.  Ight how about a formal battle ?   Or will you delete this post too ?

No, if you want to battle that's fine, because we promote that in this section of the forum.

But we don't promote beef for the sake of beef and just because you don't like some one and want to talk shit on them.  Save your bullshit gossiping, half-truths,and outright lies for the G-Spot.  Straight forward beefing is for the G-Spot forum, not here.  

If you want to come up in here with beef, you have to come on an artistic level or at least be attempting art even if your wack.  Everyone here is familiar with the concept of battlin in hip-hop and you are too, so try not to act stupid like you don't know the proper use of this forum.
so basically we ain't allowed to rip you in our rhymes ?  I wanna sweeten the deal.  If I win you gotta chage your name on here to all praise the lord and savior christ.  If you win I'll change my name to allah akbar or all praise be allah.... deal ?
 

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2010, 01:41:50 PM »

so basically we ain't allowed to rip you in our rhymes ?  I wanna sweeten the deal.  If I win you gotta chage your name on here to all praise the lord and savior christ.  If you win I'll change my name to allah akbar or all praise be allah.... deal ?

I think you made a typo, but yeah, ofcourse we are allowed to rip each other here on rhymes.  You know that, same as it's always been on this forum.

And I'm down with the name change and stuff but I can't do the Lord and Savior Jesus Christ thing, but maybe something else I will be willing to do, any other ideas?
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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #13 on: April 27, 2010, 01:44:57 PM »
This verse could benefit from something about champagne, cars, or guns.
 

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Re: Promised Land
« Reply #14 on: April 27, 2010, 01:58:33 PM »
This verse could benefit from something about champagne, cars, or guns.

I don't have any of those things, and I'm not going to be fake and rap about them.  A lot of people that rap about that shit don't have those things and never will.  And some don't aspire to it in the first place.  There is more to life then champagne, cars, and guns.. thank God.
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