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3-l33t

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My first drop.. (feedback plz)
« on: December 14, 2002, 05:50:35 AM »
(im new to this so :) be nice)


It's all like a game of chess piece by piece ill rise above the rest::
When y'all desceased ima still be here, dropin rhymes till the end of time::
Dis shit is hotter than Oj trial::
Im new, AND better you, Ima let it show, It'll shine on threw like the bright sun over the morning dew::
"illicit"(illest) should be my name, Mah dawgs know spittin lyrics is mah game::
Respect or no respect iz all the same, if you believe not you iz insane::
3-l33t droppin his first line, don't get happy soon ill be takin y0 fame::
Ya broke ass should apply for food stamps, cause ya babys momma getting mad crampz::
Imda champ with the big name 3-l33t blowing ya spot-n-takin ya fame.
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'Illicit'

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Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
« Reply #1 on: December 14, 2002, 07:01:34 AM »
if you call yourself illicit, we'll have a problem. cant be 2 of em lol.

not bad for your first drop btw, keep workin on it.
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3-l33t

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Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2002, 08:06:38 AM »
it was a joke to you :)
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'Illicit'

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Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2002, 08:20:00 AM »
 8) itz coo
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Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
« Reply #4 on: December 14, 2002, 12:05:45 PM »
right.. :D Tight spit..I see you taken my way with tha little :: instead of bars  ;D lol anyways...nice spit fah sho..
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Re:My first drop.. (feedback plz)
« Reply #5 on: December 15, 2002, 12:43:13 PM »
nice shit.. Keep spittin and improve man..
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