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Treasure What u Got
« on: January 23, 2003, 02:42:36 PM »
im on the edge, about to fuckin snap/
this cancer shit is gonna kill  my whole family i we relax/
i cant jus stand here and watch them die/
but how can i do anything, i jus sit at night and cry/
preying to the god above, not to take the one i love/
but he keeps takin and takin, and when the giving is in session/
this shit swicthes up, causes depression/
i cried ova a homegirl's dead sibling, now they takin my momma's dad?/
i jus keep scribbling, spittin what i feel/
but lemme ask you a question if your parents died tonight, would you really know what you had?/
or do we all take it for granted, granted, they always there/
and they love you no matter what, do shit like have they heart transplanted jus so you'd smile/
so while you sit at home, shoutin and shit/ jus picture walkin down the aisle/
at a church, dressed in black/  your cryin at the funeral/
and all you wanna do is bring em back/
so you an say goodbye, and then you wipe the tear from your eye/
and just relaise.... treasure your loved ones now.. cause we are all made to die/
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Re:Treasure What u Got
« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2003, 02:47:05 PM »
That was REAL NICE!

I read that through once, and read it again.  It got me thinkin of my dead grandfather, and how he left too soon.   :(

This piece was real deep and emotional.  I really liked it.

PROPS

PS: Sorry bout your Grandfather...I lost mine a few years ago.
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Re:Treasure What u Got
« Reply #2 on: January 23, 2003, 02:51:22 PM »
Yo, Thats Wha Dope, I Was Feelin' It, I Deff Felt The Last Line...U Got The Message Across.

Record It And I'll Hook U Up Wiv The Beat, What Ya Say?

Peace Out
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Re:Treasure What u Got
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2003, 02:55:55 PM »
dope shit reffa, real deep, felt it
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Re:Treasure What u Got
« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2003, 09:24:04 PM »
Dat waz nice......

Stay with what yur good at cuzzin......cuz yur defenitly not a battler......


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Re:Treasure What u Got
« Reply #5 on: January 24, 2003, 07:05:03 AM »
Sorry bout da death
it's was dope from the heart
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