What you reckon of my remix to Ghetto Bird.

[bez]

Ghetto Bez by Bez (Ghetto Bird)

Why oh why must your crew do no good,
Like everybody in your crew is up to no good,
You wanna get arrest and thrown in jail,
Never see the light again cos you wont get bail,
The B E Z is what the call me,
I've seen fame in all its glory,
I can't wait till I hear yer say,
We love you Bez you better than Dr.Dre,
Cos every time I release an album,
People go crazy like a immates outin,
You got your opinions but I don't want em,
You can take em and just fuckin shove em,
So just listen to what I say,
Cos you might get educated in a way,
The shit that I'm spitten is getin fuckin blured,
Motherfuckers think that they better than Ghetto Bez,

(Chorus)  Run, run, run from the ghetto Bez,
Run, run, run from the ghetto bez,

Now, My honeys here to lick my big dick when the show stops,
So pass the fuckin Alco Pops,
Cos the drink I am drinkin is weaker than water,
Drunk drivin's a bad habit but there is no order,
Then saw a dude with big hair so I shot em,
Went back and got his rings cause I forgot em,
I put my foot down and ragged past hollywood,
Watched a porno in my lolo it was fuckin good,
North, south, east or West problerly West cos west is the best,
Wish I had a rifle with 3 big bullets,
Hunt down Manchester freaks with huge mullets,
You know the Bez is cumin so you best get runnin cos I hear him cumin,
Is it a bird, no, is it a plane, no, its the Bez and hes cumin for your ass ho,
Tryin to folla, I just pop my colla then I drop a doller,
Turn round and kick your face in and then another,
Then grab your mother give her my auto then I mug her,
Went back to my old big house and looked out my window as I smoked on that Indo,
Then I had to jet back to my motherfuckin car,
Fuckin life of a superstar,

"Just put his hat, ehrrr, he combed his hair and then put his hat back
on. Errr, he's acting nonchalant up there in that cockpit, going 115
miles an hour, with the police chasing him. Ehm, they're not gonna be
real happy when they catch up with him, no matter what, the eh...
Ehrr, they hate, they hate a bigmouth even worse."
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It aint finished yet I just wanted to get sum opinions!