The Lost Souljaz - Take a Glimpse

[bLaDe]

Sup ya'll, me and doggy aka pittbull[The Lost Souljaz] made a song for fun some time ago, so I thought id post it here for sum feedback ...

Its called "Take A Glimpse"
-Hi-Fi- (Hi-Fi is reccomended)
-Lo-Fi- (Sounds horrible)

-Download 1-
-Download 2-

Peep it, constructive critism is greatly appreciated, thanks, peace

  -{bLaDe}

[bLaDe]

Here are my lyrics, read it while your bumping it, thanks....


[Pittbull]
From the soul its so energetic...
A glimpse into my world only if u let it..

[bLaDe]
A bond between my pen and my spirit...
rising a tide of emotions with my lyrics...

The soul manifests its activity
in certain "faculties"
bombin emcees atmoicly
flowing like the breeze
its nature of my phycology
like aristotles philocophys
Like nostradamus, please beleive it
im spittin from my book of prophecys, changin like seasons

Growing like the earth
through the look of the centuries
its all about death and birth,
in and out quick like armed robberies

Tremendious Spits sprout quick when my pen hits
horrendious splits transmit outta my lyrical centric [word]
umbilical rips, new seed is born into this world of hectic
men jus lookin for a girl to sex wid

infected
like a disease
risin like yeast in high degrees
Stingin like killa bees
giving birth to seeds
Why does it hurt to breathe
cuz im surrounded by polluted rap
uprooted the wack
using drastic rap tactics,
gymnastics, verbal backflips
leavin ya mind in a murderious tranfix
fuck reachin for your gats
inflictin hip paralysis
Semantic analysis
of my battle wits
meltin steel bars like blacksmiths
rated R cuz im graphic
makin my mark
leavin scars like .back whips..
like a shoplifter in kmart im outta this...


[dirtydoggs verse]

[bLaDes verse]:

yo, take a glimpse into my text..
 rappers orbit me like the moon ,east to west
 claimin they be the best, but they aint ready
 so they jest
 cuz they dont shine, they jus reflect [fo real?]
 like spiritual crystal objects
 my lyrical pistol projects
 the enevitable, demise-- A.K.A death
the fakes-aint a threat
they-stay-perplexed
Me against the world
I can relate to malcolm x
but yo honestly..
I hate -to-convey threats
and before I take my last breath
I wanna sit down ..and debate-with-the-vets
Prophets crusifixed,
killaz screamin whos next
as the world turns
even cool pearls burn
Pointin fingaz at each otha
pullin triggaz at our brothers
look in the mirror suckaz,  
we are the real threat
and as i once said
if theres a king there shall be a mcbeth...


[Doggy aka Pittbull and bLaDe singing]

[Outro]
Yo...bLaDe and Pittbull, aka the Lost Souljaz...Take a Glimpse..coming atcha in

2003...and yo im out..peace



  -{bLaDe}

[bez]

yo, I love the beat, shit is nice and mellow, the rappin is good but sometimes you are ALL saying too much shit in one line so your running out of air fast and its hard to understand what you ar all saying. I read along with the lyrics and that makes it easier, but still it was cool. I give about 7/10.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

like i told u before on AIM...Nice shit...PeACe

['Illicit']

nice, good flow and suitable beat.  dope track

[HBKid_Jr]

you are correct sir

[.:TimeLock:.]

nice, good flow and suitable beat.  dope track

[DeaDSouLjaH]

extremely dope...
keep up da good work..
beat was coo ..

[emence]

really feelin the beat, nice flow, with the lyrics was a dope track, specially verse1..blease bUlieve it...pz

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

lol @ Doggy at tha start.....Dat waz tite.....

Feelin that beat yall, Hope we can recycle and make somethin out of it in da future......

Lyrics on point......Good sHit.

[Immortal]

that shit was fine as fuck

keep it up!!!

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

My brother Blade is fine as fuck

hmmmmm, dats really disturbing.....

[bLaDe]

My brother Blade is fine as fuck

hmmmmm, dats really disturbing.....

What is disturbing is your childish gay pranks which only immature gay people laugh at, peace

  -{bLaDe}

[ZILLA THA GOODFELLA]

What is disturbing is your childish gay pranks which only immature gay people laugh at, peace

  -{bLaDe}

lmao......learn how 2 take a joke homie......Dun take it so hard on yurself......Recently, U been gettin offended by everything......Spark up a blunt and relax......

[bez]

Why is there an argument in nearly every thread on WCC, shit sucks.