<<MACK vs DeAdSoULjAh>>

[DeaDSouLjaH]

here are da rules,
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max bars : 15
3-0 K.O
first to 4 wins
no crew votes

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and all votes shud be explained..

[DeaDSouLjaH]

fuck another ryming class-in-session , mack my worst student got his ass-in-detention,but its for life coz i pass-some-agression/
imma abt to spit dope lines-in-sucession , i've got lyrical mines-in-ma-posession , i'll maximise your signs-of-depression/
shit i feel like i'm nasir-jones and you're  jay-z, my words are like laser-domes, comin at ya with razor-tones/
my 'BOOK OF RHYMES' when opened will shred-ya-bones, "come on you can temme" your favourite rapper's fred-from-da-flintstones/
fuck man dont be so hungry, start eatin, 'not-biting', damn if i started sellin you would ave 'bought-my-writin', battlin me??, a shot-ya-invitin/
you're in eternal darkness, coz u havent even tried-writing ,lookin for someone else to provide-the-lighting, you're shameless you dont care if your pride's-dying/
i see you spit wack shit ever since you-were-exposed , shit your lines flow-blur-n-unopposed, you go "ga ga" if a nude elton john had posed/
my murderous plans remain-undisclosed , your lines show your brain's-decomposed, u like jermaine-had-supposed, and then me like D-R-E came and had you disposed/
your so called 'punches' hittin nuthin-but-air, watch as your lines be clingin-in-despair,i'll strip ya lines like u were rappin in beijing-totally-bare/
fuck now u're out in the real world after all that child-care,i dont care if you're a kid i wont give you a mild-scare, my lines arecompiled-to-tear
you wanted me in yo fucked-up-crew?? , i'll jus spit and you devious assailants will duck-n-still-get-sliced-thru, i feel like a hunter huntin down winnie da pooh/
gareefa dawg i respect-you, but this mack bitch you should ave reject-this-foo,him and rymin are like fat joe tryin to attack-thru-kungfu/
your lyrics like da shit on a britney-track , damn dat kinda skills u cant use to hit-me-back,i'll put to disgrace your lowly-attack/
jus fucked this newbie-named-mack, showed how his lines slowly-turned-wack and how his pride barely-returned-intact/

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[da_notorious_mack]

dude-what?only dead soldier that get respect is tu-pac
so its melanin ya kru-lack,better find the 8 mile script and use-that
only way you winnin see i abuse-rap who you callin the new-cat
i used ta run-this-board now i resort ta use my gun-on-this-broad
see while ya mum's-was-whored,mack-was-bored
so i show the bitch why they call me mack-for
i see you know-ya-history,dont see ya bitin the last-emcee-dissin-me
cus all that shit-i-read,no punches jus 14 bars of mack bit-instead
shots lick-ya-head,how the fuck can a dick spit-when-dead
dont you see how-i-manifest now-get-ya-clan-sum-vests
so you wanna hang-wit-vets til the DA we bang-on-sets
aiight 8 mile style ill flip-it-on-you seein as you try ta shit-on-my-kru
if a wack ass clique-or-a-kru wanna recruit-this-dude
then dawg what that mean-about ya skillz and you.............

[DeaDSouLjaH]

votes pls..

[.:TimeLock:.]

umm mack what happened dawg? lol..any way
let me review this shit and make my vote clear...

mack your shit was coo but the lyrical content was kinda lame and u didn't use no matas like u usually do, strange... but anyway your shit did not stand out over Deadsouljah's....

his shit was more wordy and kept up a good flow and had some coo disses.. altogether DS had the better verse

vote=DS

[:-:Mistah Menace:-:]

umm mack what happened dawg? lol..any way
let me review this shit and make my vote clear...

mack your shit was coo but the lyrical content was kinda lame and u didn't use no matas like u usually do, strange... but anyway your shit did not stand out over Deadsouljah's....

his shit was more wordy and kept up a good flow and had some coo disses.. altogether DS had the better verse

vote=DS

[DeaDSouLjaH]

hey thanx for votin timelock and emcee menace ..

me up 2-0 ..

[DeaDSouLjaH]

damn .. one more vote !!

[__kaLipZo__]

didnt really feel mack's verse this time, usually droppin some good disses, sum metaz, but this time didnt come all that strong imo, ds took this battle w/o a doubt,

"mack your shit was coo but the lyrical content was kinda lame and u didn't use no matas like u usually do, strange... but anyway your shit did not stand out over Deadsouljah's....

his shit was more wordy and kept up a good flow and had some coo disses.. altogether DS had the better verse"

vote - Ds

[DeaDSouLjaH]

nice battle mack
3-0 KO , i win