Kalipzo vs Mack

[da_notorious_mack]

normal rules blah blah blah(i hate settin up battles)

[__kaLipZo__]

okie dokie

[__kaLipZo__]

les say...unlim bar limit, spit wut u want, doesnt matta
3-0 = Ko
4 to win
no dick ridin, "points to sonax and menace"
verses due by friday

[da_notorious_mack]

damn these newbies comin a.....dime-a-dozen
i see all these "bitch" but aint got....time-ta-fuck-um
kalip-zo?got ya feelin "blue" like a unhappy.....crip-bro
and right now im usin the shit-flow anna full......clip-yo
did i ever slip-no! mack runs thru elite ranks like....finish-lines
how u live-wit-rhymes that dont have the....wit-in-mine
ya skills might click-in-time,like the.......worst-mouse
when i dispurse-crowds,like shoppers in......burst-clouds
but ya fail-ta-reign,read this now,it a....tale-a-fame
it starts wit the male-ta-blame,or ya mutha wit her...sale-on-game
9 months late her legs open-again,doctor in bed wit her....scopin-fa-brains
out you came,destined ta be mopin-in-drains,mums was....hopin-fa-lames
a excuse-fa-abortion,should have been.....usin-precautions
but a H.I.V carrier offerin $20 extra with out now she.....losin-her-fortune
16 years-on,the tears-gone,you still blanked by ya....peers-dun
but you need ta hear-sum,we on fakes like barb wire...we tear-um

lol fuck knows what happened wit this....was ina story tellin mode take that in mind people

[__kaLipZo__]

Goin Eminem Style on this kid...


~May I have your attention please?~
~May I have your attention please?~
~will all "GAy"-"DA's" please sit down?~
~I repeat, will all "GAy"-DA's" please sit down?~
~Problem here, time to take-down these "rap-clowns"~



This cat claims to "Mack this and that", butt Kill's gone, so whos got ya-back?//~
Ya say your sis "Can-rap", tits are what she-lacks, but im sure you "know-that"//~
but while Macks on-his-knees "chokin", Xearo shows the rest of DA, how to properly use a "trojan"//~[lol]
Kill split, now how do they promote they "slogan", " 3 gays and 1 bita, picture these kids "Rol-lin"//~



~Now this looks like a job for the Elitest crew~
~So everybody, laugh at this Emcee of a foo~
~Cuz when it comes to rap, ya sista owns you!~


When it comes to biting, Mack "chews-well", ya gonna make a album?, obviously that didnt-"sell"//~
but behind these bars, Mack "dwells", entrapped in my "rap-cell", you-pack-glocks?, but no shells//~
only time Mack is "vet-spittin", is when he assumes-the-"position", knees droppped, contained in-to "submission"//~
defeating Mack "is-my-mission", Mack still "white-trash-livin", wel-fare case "dick-lickin"//~



~Im not in GAy DA, no Im not in GAy DA~
~All Elite wannabez please stop imitating~
~So wont the real GAy DA's please shut up~
~Please shut up, please shut up?~


If the definition of rap-talent is "biting", "pre-writing", then u fit in well, but not on this "site"//~
found ya sis's rhyme book, "take-what-ya-like", :thinkin: if it aint Ja-Rule, "than you can bite?"//~
but no matter what "you-write", ill win this battle, "one way or anotha", like stickin mah stick "inside-ya-motha"//~
tryin to comprehend my verse, so Mack goes "unda-cova", like back in tha days, where ya dad fucked ya "under-the-coverz"//~




R.I.P.  Mack



Some explantions:

:Mack says his sister rapped for him once.
:Mack was "caught" biting off of Ja-Rule.
:Every verse, he says something about him having glocks.
:Mack said he was gonna put out a album...didnt happen.
:DA is his Crew

Kinda mixed up some Eminem Choruses from Real Slim Shady, and Without me, just for kicks

[@Ss@sSiN]

shit thats heat^^

[da_notorious_mack]

lol somebody plz tell me when i bit ja rule......
lol i think you a lil confused....my sister 11...she aint writin shit....
it was a punch in a battle..lil man...i was sayin koncept would relate more to my sisters level of spittin


damn you based half ya punches on fake personals....nice verse tho...can we get sum votes

[__kaLipZo__]

"straight ghetto we-hate-da-burbs,imma get my sis ta spit maybe youll relate-ta-hers"

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and we'll see whos "lil" when the votes come in kid

[da_notorious_mack]

"straight ghetto we-hate-da-burbs,imma get my sis ta spit maybe youll relate-ta-hers"

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and we'll see whos "lil" when the votes come in kid

lol you really are dumb if i say im going to get my sister to spit,how does that mean she has wrote fa me....

[__kaLipZo__]

i wouldnt doubt she does "spit" for you....your full of secrets

[da_notorious_mack]

i wouldnt doubt she does "spit" for you....your full of secrets

lol u funny...now when did i bite ja rule.......

the thang bout personals.....they gotta be tru lil man

[__kaLipZo__]

i wouldnt doubt she does "spit" for you....your full of secrets

lol u funny...now when did i bite ja rule.......

the thang bout personals.....they gotta be tru lil man

my mom has Hiv - no
she had a abortion - no
im 16? - no

and u say my personals arent tru..check ya self

[__kaLipZo__]

votes...c'mon peepz~

[Kill]

difficult to vote on. Mack's was based on multis and it was kinda story-tellin. You didn't get personal, but since Kalipzo hasn't done too much on WCC it was difficult to. Still you could've done shit like dissin sigs, names, krus etc. You could've tried to get bigger words and wordplay in.

Kalipzo, your shit was pretty different. You had more wordplay and some personals, but personals that ain't true rather hit you than your opponent. You misinterpreted a line by Mack, that's ok, but he bit off Ja Rule, wtf ? He bit off somebody on WCC...I liked the first part (usin me was nice lol) but after that the personals weren't based on true shit and unlike Mack you didn't have multis and the flow was worse. That's basically why I give it to Mack

VOTE = MACK

[__kaLipZo__]

dunno..someone told me he bit off ja rule..so i slapped it in there