Improvement...

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

Anotha day lost, gotta 'motivation debt', and I still aint paid costs/
In charge of mah own life, but not tryna play boss, ratha then get up off mah ass ill sit around n stay tossed/
Every single day, i think of wayz tah get paid, wayz tah find shade frum tha heat that ive made/
I gotta fire inside, but sumtimez that shit fadez, thoughtz of what i want in life, but jus sleep tha shit away/
Talent, i got, jus need sumwhere to apply it/
If fanz was hooked on 'dope' lyrikz id be tha one to 'supply' it, but would they buy it??/
I got 'samples', fah anyone who wanna try it/
Rap gamez like street hustle, street smarts ova street muscle/
If what i 'serve is addictive", then theyll come back wit tha quiknezz/
Itz lyrikal siknezz, and im alwayz tryna spread the disease/
And at tha same time get infected by catz that are betta then me/
Itz a constant improvement, call it a learning tool/
I got flamez in mah lungz, but not only burning foolz/
Letz keep it real yall, push all tha hatin aside/
Cuz each one of us got sumthin great waitin inside.../



ugggg....im bored az fuk today....and itz saturday, i think ima git out tha house now lol

[TiNmaN]

Yo man that was pretty ill, i was feeling it.

[.:TimeLock:.]

cool spit homie that shit seem like was really some heart felt shit on your part... just one of them dayz i when u relecting on shit...coo spit

[Inspectah]

...felt it, i liked the overall ryhme structure, and the multi's were ill, like always i guess, do we have monthly awards for stuff? ima confused coz someone said that i could be Rookie of the Month? ^^ lol... im proud if people think i am.

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[Koncept]

tight shit, but this is a pretty old post

[Kill]

I must've overlooked that when it was originally posted, saw it yesterday. Pretty tight shit, kinda different from your usual battle style shit Tone...props