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I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« on: February 16, 2003, 03:37:20 PM »
*Biterz Mind*

I could pretend im writing, or spend time biting, whats better, copying n pasting, or not elevatin?//
Im whack, so ima bite a track, take out a gap, to make it big enough, to fit it in the voterz trapz//
They vote? or sit down like me and take notes?//
No one gone find me guilty, my conscience hopes//

*Inspectah*

i interupt-n-jam, stop the signal, lost contact with the person you trying to corupt-n-skam//
watch me abduct-this-man, i'll bring heat, revealing your weakness n saw spot, which i conduct-from-hands//
i interogate-in-silence, you refuse to co-operate, i'll manipulate-with-violence, dont fuck with my tolorence//

*Biter*

Got evidence-to-prove? any fuckin' documents thats gone be any relevent-to-use?//
To damn confident-to-loose, ima call ya bluff then be overdominate-for-you-to-abuse//
Let me illiminate-and-choose, gimme a chance to prove my innocence, or you gone just, discriminate-and-bruise?//
My conscience til break-down, i will give you my doggy eyes, and my fake-frown, gimme a chance...//

*Inspectah*

..interuption, lemme finish where ya started, wouldnt give you the time of day, not even a second glance//
Shitting ya self now? change-ya-pants, got the jury hollaring "guilty" i wonder why? explain-those-chants!//
"Order Order" your restricted-of-options, bout to loose this case, so take one last breathe of freedom, now-the-fate//
We gotten so close since we i predicted-your-conscience, i got to you so much, i mite get closer and be your soul-mate//


Feedback Please, ^^ first time i really used multis!

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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2003, 04:13:54 PM »
one of the tightest verses I've seen by a newbie in a while...I really liked it, keep it up
 

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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #2 on: February 16, 2003, 04:49:45 PM »
^^ Thankz Homicide...

Bumpin' a few topics ahead! :)

More feedback please!

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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2003, 07:52:59 AM »
*Bump*
 

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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2003, 07:56:19 AM »
lol damn, your first rhyme usin multis?? if so,  it took me ages to get a lil good at em, and its still hard as fuck for me.  

but verrry nice piece homie.
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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2003, 09:08:22 AM »
*Bumpity Bump Bump*
 

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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #6 on: February 17, 2003, 09:42:08 AM »
damn man lol  dont expect too much feedback period. battles dont get voted on that quickly either, just accept it
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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #7 on: February 17, 2003, 09:58:30 AM »
uve got talent keep it up jus calm down ppl with give feedbak in time
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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #8 on: February 17, 2003, 11:08:51 AM »
 :o i kno, just wanting to see what ya'll think, soz lol.... hey all i hear is some peepz talking bout someone called Indy? who is he? lol


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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #9 on: February 17, 2003, 11:11:35 AM »
I heard Indy left the board,  is it tru?  how come?? ???
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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #10 on: February 17, 2003, 11:15:07 AM »
yeh i think he left coz of assassin i think  ::) but didnt he have a battle whoeva won deleted there accounts?
 :-\ aint sure
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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #11 on: February 17, 2003, 11:16:22 AM »
I dunno man, i mean i read the thread where Emcee Enigma said that quote "since indy left, im the only 1 left" unquote or something like that.. i mean why he beeing talked about so much, was he good or something!??? lol

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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #12 on: February 17, 2003, 11:17:47 AM »
Well anyways when ya'll can gimme some feedback its all good! ~ 1 ~
 

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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #13 on: February 17, 2003, 11:19:34 AM »
ermmmmm he woz'nt the best but who am i 2 judge i aint good neither but not many ppl liked him coz he tried 2 make a crew better than "the elite" and then his own crew members turned on him guess shit jus got outa hand 4 him
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Re:I:// Biterz... (First sign of my multis)
« Reply #14 on: February 17, 2003, 11:31:40 AM »
indy was a cool cat wit good skills.   too bad he left. I wouldntve accepted a challenge with the condition of deletin the account. fuck that.

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