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journal rhymes, song in progress
« on: November 01, 2013, 03:28:02 AM »
Verse 1:

Fuck them, their life is right, mines left
Fuck them, their just
misinterpreting their causes of success
years that ask questions
years that answer
anxieties suppressing
that spread like cancer
The answer
dig deeper
be, a big thinker
Be the oasis in the desert
Many peasants, many people
try to be drinking from you
seeing beneath you
it's too steep though/
run out of water/
just dig deeper
for yourself there's a treasure
hide it out of plain site
Like the woman I love
I talk to secretly ever night

Chorus:

There's something I'm denying myself
maybe there's a deeper question
Some thought, someone I hate?
Maybe it's just depression?
what's happening
I can't even rhyme what I'm denying
what a bitch/
what's the truth that will obliterate this?

Verse 2:

Props to one, Cus D'amato
he had the motto
for the hero to follow
hero and non-hero
holding the same fear
how the act on that fear
is what gets them to where
they going
holding me down
can't take it
there's just no way to ever blend in/
tell me fake it till you make it, pretend/
I'll do whatever man
I just want this depression to end

Chorus:

There's something I'm denying myself
maybe there's a deeper question
Some thought, someone I hate?
Maybe it's just depression?
what's happening
I can't even rhyme what I'm denying
what a bitch/
what's the truth that will obliterate this?

Verse 3:

It's hard to forget/
someone who gave you
so much to remember
I think about her, every September
But they thwarted me, pushed to plunder
What God and Greed have brought together,
let no love-- Put asunder
Paradise we found is frail
Against men's fears it shal -- always fail
Don't wait for man to recognize your greatness
just live it, let the world catch up
But if your too far off the cusp
then, yo, you just fucked up!
In this land of.. failed battles
and sunken ships
I want to kiss your lips
just to see if I still exist!

« Last Edit: November 01, 2013, 03:30:55 AM by Infinite »
Givin' respect to 2pac September 7th-13th The Day Hip-Hop Died

(btw, Earth 🌎 is not a spinning water ball)
 

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Re: journal rhymes, song in progress
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2013, 09:13:08 AM »
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Re: journal rhymes, song in progress
« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2013, 11:22:48 PM »
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power

Nah.. that shit was weak.. and I realized how weak it was when I tried recordin it at your studio in LA.  Shits got to come harder than that cuzz..
Givin' respect to 2pac September 7th-13th The Day Hip-Hop Died

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