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A Rhyme about lost loved one... Some of y'all will be able to relate
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Muthafuckin' Don!
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A Rhyme about lost loved one... Some of y'all will be able to relate
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June 03, 2003, 01:18:14 PM »
poetic and meaningful, it makes a change in society
it saves time, and i dont have to decide if these words are lying to me
rhymes dont have to be complex, but everything should have some meaning
people need to see, what life would be, if the heart never stopped bleeding
im succeeding in life now, no-one can stop me now
try and bring me down, but im so high im touchin Mars
but i still have concideration - people are dying.. AIDS, cancer and SARS
all global problems. something we cant all ignore
but most will only pay attention when a loved one hits the floor
a cold breath fills my head as i remember the sight of him on his death bed
too young to leave me, but too far gone to believe me
when i say that he's taugh me things i will never forget
never did see him the day before he was taken, somethin i will always regret
but we live on, and the spirit will live inside of me
and now he's lying, i hope he watches and always guides me
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Re:A Rhyme about lost loved one... Some of y'all will be able to relate
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June 03, 2003, 01:31:34 PM »
yup I can relate to that homie. especially the last part, deep piece. thx fa peepin my shit too
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Re:A Rhyme about lost loved one... Some of y'all will be able to relate
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June 03, 2003, 02:47:40 PM »
i like what u had 2 say... and i definitely feel u on the subject matter... keep droppin that ill ish... 1
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thanx for the feedback people..
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nice piece..... i can relate to it
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