WCC Cup... Mack vs. Qurate-L (winner Mack)

[M Dogg™]

Alright, this is the first round of the WCC Cup. The winner stays, the loser can go home. But there is a wild card spot, so maybe the loser can return, we'll see. But you'll go against a Hall of Famer in TimeLock, so good luck with that. Rules...

bar max - 10 (I ain't reading over 160 bars to judge, trust me, go over and get DQed, sorry)
Due by Tuesday, June 17, 2003
I judge, but if you think that I was unfair, you can ask for a 2nd opinion, and I'll get another vet to make the call. After all, I'm judging 16 verses at once, kind of hard. So good luck.

[da_notorious_mack]

Damn this kid saw 8 mile,cus i rep the D,he thought-he-rabbit..
dont hate me tho,blame M,that u got me in the tourney-brackets..
youza scrawny-addict,addicted to dick,lubricants and hand-cuffs..
now will the mufuckin dub cc stand-up?..
and get their hands-up,dude...trust me i been to hell-an-back..
and i aint gotta say im betta than you..voters will tell-you-that!..
sorry kid but it been fortold-you-failin-son..
cus who mack be to lose to a 14 year old-canadian?
i should ghostwrite for these kids,ya know spit-shit-for-them..
you aint worth the effort,got back to the lik-wit-forum..

thatll do...is that 10 barz already.....shiiiit

[Qurate-L]

aight mack i may be only 14 and in grade eight/
but let me give this shit to ya straight and you can debate/
or you could jus come at me and start to hate/
tha prophecy may have beaten me but i still control yer fate/
your words are inate and every verb slurred/
i heard you could do better then some computer nerd/
if you wana get through this shit be vile/
you wont say yer age bitch i know yer senile/
shit your still at tha, stage of denile?/
come at me mack before you have a heart attack/

10 lines fast lol

[M Dogg™]

Alright... these verse were quick verses, both of them I can tell.

We'll break it down like this.

Mack, your shit was pretty cool, though it wasn't a full vet diss. I did think though that it was affective, and that it did the job for a first round diss.

Qurate-L, your lyrics were alright... but too rushed. It seemed that it wasn't up to par, but you did do the job. the only problem was is that you sounded to be on the defensive, so that's not good.

Vote=Mack