WCC Cup Round 3... Mack vs. 2nd Nature

[M Dogg™]

Alright, the 3rd round, and we going make this interesting. You can use sexually punches... lol. But this time you have to rap not as yourself, but as an actual rapper dissing your rival.

Rules:
10-15 bars
due by Friday, July 11, 2003
winner battle the winner of Thaprophecy vs. vitodeluca

rhymer = actual rapper
Mack = LL Cool J (young rapper battling a legand)
2nd Nature = Kool Moe Dee (old rapper battling to get a younger rapper to show respect)

[|JEM|ILL|]

*Pulls out his dukie goldchain and shell toe Addidas*

Cheeeckin in my nigga...

[da_notorious_mack]

*flexs muscles.....writes a song fa the bitchez...*

checkin in.....dope idea by the way m dogg.....you really creative to think of ideas like this

[da_notorious_mack]

"Rise 'n' Shine" cock sucka take ya own advise..
and "Go see the Doctor" cus LL known-as-nice..
when shown-a-mic,the G.O.A.T drools-game..
or spits it,cus the bitches love Cool-James..
so get off-my-dick,cus i aint wit that homo-shit..
defeat you an Canibus dolo-bitch,you aint hot-as-this...
quit that "Gangsta Boogie" R.I.P to ya career,go Rot-In-Piss..
his brain-lacked the intellect not to get this lame-smacked..
gun-bucked if he live it dumb-luck,get his dukie chain-jacked!..
you knowed as Kool-Moe-Dee,but homies dont know how cool-moe-be..
surburban motherfucka who you foolin-G?..
"how you like me now?" i think we all scream-the-correct-reply..
we dont motherfucka.. the ruler supreme-will-testify..
that-is-L,im like an Ani-mal,plus i eat eat eat emcees like im Hanni-bal..
your end is dramat-ical....

[|JEM|ILL|]

* His First Job was Custodial duty at Sonic...
** If you slammed into a hearse you near dead folks...near death experience...get it?
*** He was Obese when he started rhyming...
**** Kool Moe Dee was the first hip hop artist to perform on a grammy stage...
***** Death Blow was KMDs last diss to L there fore he already delivered..get it...

KOOL MOE DEE here... LL Cool J is the cat im rippin...
**COUGH COUGH** Fuck This booty chatter James...Heres a diss givin...
He couldnt get close to my shit When he cleaned toilets for a livin!!*

Imma size this fag rookie up like a Buff midget takin-a-stand!!
Ladies love C J? Please, ill end ya sex live , When I start shankin-ya-hands!!(Bitch)
New kid in the game, battlin a vet...I only take-respect...
Best get ya head outta ya ass b4 ya sit down n break-ya-neck!(Cocky bastard...)

**FLOW SWITCH**
Choke his ass, nigga how ya like me now!?, loss of breath-is-serious.
'Slam you into a hearse', and give you a 'near death-experience!'**
We all saw you when you started, Lookin like a member of the fat-boys!***
Steroid nigga, bad-choise..Cuz  like givin loud gifts...he only rap-noise/wrap noise...
With that sad-voice, pre pubesent, tryin to look hard, with that granny-face...(HA!)
Bet ya ass was flippin when i was first to wreck the grammy-stage!****

Head shot... He gone I already delivered the 'Death-Blow'...*****
But 'yous right' man, 'wonder why all the people in the left-rows'...damn...
And Here's a lil somethin for the "pimp" inside him, I kill-gayz...
Only time he got to Mac/Mack was when he was chllin wit bill-gates!

[vitodeluca]

Yo, can you edit this and make it more readable?  Some of the text got messed up

[|JEM|ILL|]

Yo, can you edit this and make it more readable?  Some of the text got messed up

what you mean?

[vitodeluca]

at first it looked wierd, like when you copy and paste from a word program...it looks good now though.

[Maestro Minded]

ima make this vote short, the winner is 2nd Nature because his punches and personals were better structured and layed. Mack had way better flow, but his rhymes were just to "raw", this is a lyrical battle,

WINNER: 2nd Nature