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Slim-x

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Last Words
« on: July 25, 2003, 05:11:22 PM »
Freestyle " Last Words "

I Come From A Place Where No One See My Face Only Where Thugz Die. Moma Starts To Cry Why My Baby Gotz Ta Die.

Livin In Tha Hood Still Up To No Good Livin My Thug Life With Tha Price Of Death With In Still Hangin With My Close Of Kin And You Say I Just Can't Win Hell I Ain't Begen I'll Keep Rappin Tell My Lung Fill in Till My Chest Caves In You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See Ya Better Just Let Me Be Just Gotz To Be Free I Brake Chains That Blow Yo Brains And Make Yo Baby Moma Srceam In Pain When She Hears My Name. Itz All Bout My Fame

You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See It All Bout Bein A G Thug Livin Is A Part Of Me.

Livin In Tha Hood Still Up To No Good Livin My Thug Life With Tha Price Of Death With In Still Hangin With My Close Of Kin And You Still Be Sayin I Just Can't Win Hell I Ain't Begen I'll Keep Rappin Tell My Lung Fill in Till My Chest Caves In You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See Ya Better Just Let Me Be Just Gotz To Be Free

I Come From A Place Where No One See My Face Only Where Thugz Die. Moma Starts To Cry Why My Baby Gotz Ta Die.

----------Brake In Song Rain Drops-------
Tha Sound Of Shotz Blattin In Tha Air

----------Start Beat---------------------------

Standin Tall As Tha Man Of Steal Comin All Out With A Blast To Kill A Killa With Plains So Ill Mama If I Die Before I Walk Pray My Baby Boy Don't Fall As Me Thug Livin Ain't A Place To Be

Two Hitz And Im Down Almost Broke My Crown And With Blood All Around As I Start To Fade I Prayed " Lord Can A Thug Playa Last In Heaven " A Tear Drops My Eye. Tha Fear Of A Dame Nation In My Head.

" Live By Tha Gun Die By Tha Gun"

I Close My Eyes And It Begens Is This Tha End.

------------Sounds Of Tha Cripped---------

"I Rise"

-----Poeple Talking In Back Ground------

Who Is He

-----Poeple Talking In Back Ground------

End Of Part One.



Part Two

Rate This - Here I Cometh ( Last Words )

Anther Playa Falls Agen How Can I Begen I Be A Thug Till Tha End No Grace Fo A Thug Playa In This Life Of Sin Even I Lost My Life In End...

----------Shots Blattin In Tha Air----------

News Reporters " Just Anther Gangsta Falls From What Seem To Be A Drive Bye "

--------------BombsGoOff-------------------
-----------Change Beat---------------------

-------------Sounds From Tha Criptd------

" I Rise "
--People Talking In Tha Back Ground---
Who Is He
--People Talking In Tha Back Ground---

I Rise To Tha Top Of the Heap Cause Thats Just How I Creep True Playaz Can't Be Beat And You Know I Bring Tha Heat In Just A Week I Was At My Peck. You Just Be Weak Talkin Shit To A Thug behind Closed Doors Actin Like A Playa Who Got Game Play Off My Fame Tryin To Still My Name Actin Like You Gotz Nothin To Gain.

------------- Load Speaker----------------

Homie Yo Shit Is Weak

-------------Load Speaker-----------------

You Be Thinkin Ya On Top Till I Hit Yo Baby Momas Spot ( Pop )

She Be Dropin It Down On My Jock.
Sceamin Like She Be Seein Demons

Callin A Playaz Name Talkin Bout My Game And How Yo Shit Is Lame.

---------------Change Beat----------------

Damn Homie You Had This Thug In Chains Sweetin Hell Fire.

Never Comin Back You Where Thinkin Thats A Fact And Now Yo Shit Be Packed.

I Be From Tha Grave All My Lil Homie Be Brave Cause True Thug Playa Gona Be Saved.

Its Just Bout This Thug Life Baby !!!!

--------------Brake In Song-----------------

" You Know You Need This Thug In Yo Life Talkin Bout How A Thug Be Fillin It Up."

Thats Right I Know.

Baby One Day Ill Be Back Tell My Lil Homie Don't Cry His Daddy Will See Him In Tha Sky.
--------------Brake In Song----------------

I Was Standin As Tha Man Of Steal Comin Out With A Blast To Kill A Killa With Plains So Ill Mama If I Die Before I Wake Pray My Baby Boy Don't Fall As Me - Thug Livin Ain't A Place To Be
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2003, 06:08:46 PM »
Rate My Song And Tell Me Why ????


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Re:Last Words
« Reply #2 on: July 25, 2003, 10:17:49 PM »
fuck thats long
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Re:Last Words
« Reply #3 on: July 25, 2003, 10:28:06 PM »

Thinks Fo Bein Real I Don't Write That Much And Mustly Stick Ta Workin With Other Groups...

Please Out Kevin Knight      
 

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #4 on: July 25, 2003, 10:32:46 PM »
Freestyle " Last Words "

I Come From A Place Where No One See My Face Only Where Thugz Die. Moma Starts To Cry Why My Baby Gotz Ta Die.

Livin In Tha Hood Still Up To No Good Livin My Thug Life With Tha Price Of Death With In Still Hangin With My Close Of Kin And You Say I Just Can't Win Hell I Ain't Begen I'll Keep Rappin Tell My Lung Fill in Till My Chest Caves In You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See Ya Better Just Let Me Be Just Gotz To Be Free I Brake Chains That Blow Yo Brains And Make Yo Baby Moma Srceam In Pain When She Hears My Name. Itz All Bout My Fame

You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See It All Bout Bein A G Thug Livin Is A Part Of Me.

Livin In Tha Hood Still Up To No Good Livin My Thug Life With Tha Price Of Death With In Still Hangin With My Close Of Kin And You Still Be Sayin I Just Can't Win Hell I Ain't Begen I'll Keep Rappin Tell My Lung Fill in Till My Chest Caves In You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See Ya Better Just Let Me Be Just Gotz To Be Free

I Come From A Place Where No One See My Face Only Where Thugz Die. Moma Starts To Cry Why My Baby Gotz Ta Die.

----------Brake In Song Rain Drops-------
Tha Sound Of Shotz Blattin In Tha Air

----------Start Beat---------------------------

Standin Tall As Tha Man Of Steal Comin All Out With A Blast To Kill A Killa With Plains So Ill Mama If I Die Before I Walk Pray My Baby Boy Don't Fall As Me Thug Livin Ain't A Place To Be

Two Hitz And Im Down Almost Broke My Crown And With Blood All Around As I Start To Fade I Prayed " Lord Can A Thug Playa Last In Heaven " A Tear Drops My Eye. Tha Fear Of A Dame Nation In My Head.

" Live By Tha Gun Die By Tha Gun"

I Close My Eyes And It Begens Is This Tha End.

------------Sounds Of Tha Cripped---------

"I Rise"

-----Poeple Talking In Back Ground------

Who Is He

-----Poeple Talking In Back Ground------

End Of Part One.



Part Two

Rate This - Here I Cometh ( Last Words )

Anther Playa Falls Agen How Can I Begen I Be A Thug Till Tha End No Grace Fo A Thug Playa In This Life Of Sin Even I Lost My Life In End...

----------Shots Blattin In Tha Air----------

News Reporters " Just Anther Gangsta Falls From What Seem To Be A Drive Bye "

--------------BombsGoOff-------------------
-----------Change Beat---------------------

-------------Sounds From Tha Criptd------

" I Rise "
--People Talking In Tha Back Ground---
Who Is He
--People Talking In Tha Back Ground---

I Rise To Tha Top Of the Heap Cause Thats Just How I Creep True Playaz Can't Be Beat And You Know I Bring Tha Heat In Just A Week I Was At My Peck. You Just Be Weak Talkin Shit To A Thug behind Closed Doors Actin Like A Playa Who Got Game Play Off My Fame Tryin To Still My Name Actin Like You Gotz Nothin To Gain.

------------- Load Speaker----------------

Homie Yo Shit Is Weak

-------------Load Speaker-----------------

You Be Thinkin Ya On Top Till I Hit Yo Baby Momas Spot ( Pop )

She Be Dropin It Down On My Jock.
Sceamin Like She Be Seein Demons

Callin A Playaz Name Talkin Bout My Game And How Yo Shit Is Lame.

---------------Change Beat----------------

Damn Homie You Had This Thug In Chains Sweetin Hell Fire.

Never Comin Back You Where Thinkin Thats A Fact And Now Yo Shit Be Packed.

I Be From Tha Grave All My Lil Homie Be Brave Cause True Thug Playa Gona Be Saved.

Its Just Bout This Thug Life Baby !!!!

--------------Brake In Song-----------------

" You Know You Need This Thug In Yo Life Talkin Bout How A Thug Be Fillin It Up."

Thats Right I Know.

Baby One Day Ill Be Back Tell My Lil Homie Don't Cry His Daddy Will See Him In Tha Sky.
--------------Brake In Song----------------

I Was Standin As Tha Man Of Steal Comin Out With A Blast To Kill A Killa With Plains So Ill Mama If I Die Before I Wake Pray My Baby Boy Don't Fall As Me - Thug Livin Ain't A Place To Be


put your shit in bars, it makes it a whole lot easier to read.

kick ass album
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #5 on: July 25, 2003, 11:03:49 PM »

Was up

I Don't Know How To Write With Bars. But I'll Try.

Kevin Knight

P.S - That One Was More Like A Video Then Just A Song.
Thank Fo Tha Info Fo Real.......




( put your shit in bars, it makes it a whole lot easier to read. )
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2003, 12:53:24 AM »


Thanks Fo Your Time And Info...
 

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #7 on: July 26, 2003, 12:55:25 AM »
biaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatch....stop uppin ya thread fa feed..i dont see ya ass droppin feed fa anyone else...so dont expect feed yaself....


i aint read ya spit...wasnt set out in a very good format
 

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #8 on: July 26, 2003, 12:56:01 AM »
bars is like

i come from a place Where No One See My Face only where thugz die/
Moma Starts To Cry Why My Baby Gotz Ta Die/



bars are like each line u spit divided up so it flows. i dunno how u flowed that verse but thats just how i guessed u flowed it.

kick ass album
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2003, 01:03:07 AM »


Fo Real I Feel What Ya Say Im Most Def Gona Show Tha Same...

Im New And Have Not Been Able Ta Yet But Fo Real I Will Take Tha Time Ta Check And Rate Yo Stuff Too.

Oh Ya Bout Tha Bars I Think i Got What You Mean ...

Ya Thats How It Is On Tha Beat.

Please Out
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #10 on: July 26, 2003, 02:43:57 AM »


Rate ^^^^
 

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #11 on: July 26, 2003, 03:21:07 AM »
stop uppin yer shit every 10 minutes mannnn! wait a while before you up your shit any more

kick ass album
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #12 on: July 26, 2003, 04:40:06 PM »



Rate  ^^^^^^^^^^
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #13 on: July 26, 2003, 11:19:10 PM »



Rate ^^^^^^^^^^^
 

Slim-x

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Re:Last Words
« Reply #14 on: August 06, 2003, 06:12:29 AM »
 Freestyle " Last Words "

I Come From A Place Where No One See My Face Only Where Thugz Die. Moma Starts To Cry Why My Baby Gotz Ta Die./
Livin In Tha Hood Still Up To No Good Livin My Thug Life With Tha Price Of Death With In
 Still Hangin With My Close Of Kin And You Say I Just Can't Win Hell I Ain't Begen
 I'll Keep Rappin Tell My Lung Fill in Till My Chest Caves In You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See Ya Better Just Let Me Be Just Gotz To Be Free
 I Brake Chains That Blow Yo Brains And Make Yo Baby Moma Srceam In Pain When She Hears My Name. Itz All Bout My Fame/
You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See It All Bout Bein A G Thug Livin Is A Part Of Me./
Livin In Tha Hood Still Up To No Good Livin My Thug Life With Tha Price Of Death With In Still Hangin With My Close Of Kin And You Still Be Sayin I Just Can't Win Hell I Ain't Begen
 I'll Keep Rappin Tell My Lung Fill in Till My Chest Caves In You Can't Stop What You Just Can't See Ya Better Just Let Me Be Just Gotz To Be Free/
I Come From A Place Where No One See My Face Only Where Thugz Die. Moma Starts To Cry Why My Baby Gotz Ta Die./
----------Brake In Song Rain Drops-------
Tha Sound Of Shotz Blattin In Tha Air
----------Start Beat---------------------------
Standin Tall As Tha Man Of Steal Comin All Out With A Blast To Kill A Killa With Plains So Ill/
 Mama If I Die Before I Walk Pray My Baby Boy Don't Fall As Me Thug Livin Ain't A Place To Be
Two Hitz And Im Down Almost Broke My Crown And With Blood All Around As I Start To Fade I Prayed " Lord Can A Thug Playa Last In Heaven "/
 A Tear Drops My Eye. Tha Fear Of A Dame Nation In My Head./
" Live By Tha Gun Die By Tha Gun"
I Close My Eyes And It Begens Is This Tha End.
------------Sounds Of Tha Cripped---------
"I Rise"
-----Poeple Talking In Back Ground------
Who Is He
-----Poeple Talking In Back Ground------
End Of Part One.
Part Two
Rate This - Here I Cometh ( Last Words )
Anther Playa Falls Agen How Can I Begen I Be A Thug Till Tha End/
 No Grace Fo A Thug Playa In This Life Of Sin Even I Lost My Life In End.../
----------Shots Blattin In Tha Air----------
News Reporters " Just Anther Gangsta Falls From What Seem To Be A Drive Bye "
--------------BombsGoOff-------------------
-----------Change Beat---------------------
-------------Sounds From Tha Criptd------
" I Rise "
--People Talking In Tha Back Ground---
Who Is He
--People Talking In Tha Back Ground---
I Rise To Tha Top Of the Heap Cause Thats Just How I Creep True Playaz Can't Be Beat/
 And You Know I Bring Tha Heat In Just A Week I Was At My Peck/
. You Just Be Weak Talkin Shit To A Thug behind Closed Doors/
 Actin Like A Playa Who Got Game Play Off My Fame Tryin To Still My Name Actin Like You Gotz Nothin To Gain./
------------- Load Speaker----------------
Homie Yo Shit Is Weak
-------------Load Speaker-----------------
You Be Thinkin Ya On Top Till I Hit Yo Baby Momas Spot ( Pop )/
She Be Dropin It Down On My Jock./
Sceamin Like She Be Seein Demons/
Callin A Playaz Name Talkin Bout My Game And How Yo Shit Is Lame./
---------------Change Beat----------------
Damn Homie You Had This Thug In Chains Sweetin Hell Fire./
Never Comin Back You Where Thinkin Thats A Fact And Now Yo Shit Be Packed./
I Be From Tha Grave All My Lil Homie Be Brave Cause True Thug Playa Gona Be Saved./
Its Just Bout This Thug Life Baby !!!!/
--------------Brake In Song-----------------
" You Know You Need This Thug In Yo Life Talkin Bout How A Thug Be Fillin It Up."/
Thats Right I Know./
Baby One Day Ill Be Back Tell My Lil Homie Don't Cry His Daddy Will See Him In Tha Sky./
--------------Brake In Song----------------
I Was Standin As Tha Man Of Steal Comin Out With A Blast To Kill A Killa With Plains So Ill Mama If I Die Before I Wake/ Pray My Baby Boy Don't Fall As Me - Thug Livin Ain't A Place To Be