T.J. VS Slim-X (VOTE)

[T.J.]

ok.... 10-15 bars
first to 4 votes

ready mang?

[Slim-x]

 Hell Ya How Much Time I Got ?

[T.J.]

however much u need.... theres no time limit on these battles

[Slim-x]

Start Off You A Five Star General So I'll Try Not Ta Be Cruel/
Cause You Bout Ta Drool/
From Rimes That Hit Harder Then Most Fucked Up Crime's/
Leavin You Thinkin You Head Of Ya time/
Till Im Finished With Rime/
And Tha Only Crime Is Ya Still Can't Find/
Or Just Too Blinde Ta See Who's Game/
And Who Gona Fall In Shame/
Ya Better Know My Name/
Feel My Fame/
Cuase I Be Bustin All Out With Some Skillz From Tha DarkCide/
So When We Clyde In Med Air Don't Fear Or Shed A Tear/
Just One Tier Was More Then You Could Bear/


I Did 13 I Hope That Is Cool. And Did It Right.

Let Me Know

Please Out

[Slim-x]

Be Back Later On To Night Bout 12:00 Pm Cali Time.....

Please Out

[T.J.]

Professor Xavier? best believe in that wheelchair you locked tight/ 1
named your label DarkCide, coz its clear that you not bright/ 2
your desperate for punches like mexicans are desperate to jump the border/
plus, you couldnt flow if your name was redman, in muddy waters/ 3
claims your a "thugg pimp" but you couldnt pick up a hoe from a warehouse/ 4
u bust slugs limp, may i see that Glock? you didnt tell me it shot flares out/
this guy aint piss to me, i'll make you like Michael Jackson, "History"/
when people state ya whackness its like debating hitler, u cant disagree/
my style is like carbon in the form of diamond, its regarded the hardest/5
slim, how can you run your own label when you cant spell "artist"?/ 6

10 bars, short n sweet


1 - Professor Xavier is from X-Men, he in a wheelchair.
2 - He got a label named DarkCide.... check The Lab
3 - Redman got an album called muddy waters
4 - hoe=garden tool
5 - Carbon in the form of diamond is the hardest element on Earth.
6 - once again, check the thread in The Lab. you'll see.


PLEASE OUT Y'ALL
get voting now

[ARYC]

ok ok here goes...
slim x:
ur verse was really really basic,u rhymed words like "crime" wit "rhyme", an sum words don't even rhyme like "tear" with "bear" + u didn't have any metaphores ,punches or smilies it just didn't seem like a battle verse + the bars were missmatched (one is long one is short)
anyway keep practicing

T.J.:
nice punches an personals ,u had sum multies like "locked bright" an "not bright",they r basic multis but it's better to use little multis then to use long forced ones that fuck up the flow

therefore winner:



T.J.

[T.J.]

thanx for the vote.... keep em comin.... 1-0

[|JEM|ILL|]

T.J. beaten up on Newbies? shame shame...lol

Vote: TJ got this every aspect of his verse was better...

[·SiNiStEr·]

T.J. beaten up on Newbies? shame shame...lol

Vote: TJ got this every aspect of his verse was better...

my vote for TJ but damn man.. face someone with some skill

you been here long enough

[Proph aka ..::Konztrukt::..]

well i dont think i should have to explain.

TJ owned this. but i knew that after i read Slim-X's verse.

Slim-x: dogg u gotta come hard and raw in battles. look for punches that hit hard, incorporate a few mutlits, meta's, and just spit raw and uncut. keep practisin dogg.

T.J: u knew when u dropped this u were gonna win. ur verse was aight but ive seen better from u, but im sure u didnt think u had to do much, and i understand that.


VOTE = T.J

[vitodeluca]

Vote= TJ, stoppin' pickin' on the new kids homie

[Slim-x]

Was Up

Ya I Know I Just Put It Together Quick And Was Not Sure Where I Was Going With It And Still New At This Besides If Im Gona Get Beat Then Why Not From Someone Whos Been Here Fo Some Time. Its Better Then Gettin My Ass Kick By A Newbie

Here Is What i Think...

1. Well That Was Ok Fo A Quick Start But Kinda Dead.
2. This Part Did Not Sound Good ( Like It Was Out Of Tha Blue )
3. That Was Way Off
4. What
5. Weak
6. Its Kinda Of Funny
7. This Part Was Ok  ( this guy aint piss to me, i'll make you like Michael Jackson, "History"/ )
8. Weak
9. Old
10. This Maybe Tha Only Real Knock You Have But Don't Really Sound Good....


I Will Be Back At A Latter Time. Tell Then Pease Out


 Professor Xavier? best believe in that wheelchair you locked tight/ 1
named your label DarkCide, coz its clear that you not bright/ 2
your desperate for punches like mexicans are desperate to jump the border/
plus, you couldnt flow if your name was redman, in muddy waters/ 3
claims your a "thugg pimp" but you couldnt pick up a hoe from a warehouse/ 4
u bust slugs limp, may i see that Glock? you didnt tell me it shot flares out/
this guy aint piss to me, i'll make you like Michael Jackson, "History"/
when people state ya whackness its like debating hitler, u cant disagree/
my style is like carbon in the form of diamond, its regarded the hardest/5
slim, how can you run your own label when you cant spell "artist"?/ 6

[T.J.]

please.... dont make me criticise your verse
and im not pickin on noobs, he answered my battle call so i battled.

[Slim-x]

Just Say Whats On My Mind ...

Don't Take It So Personel You Said Some Stuff Bout Mine And Im Cool With It So Fo Real Its Just What I Think.