4 U

[pappy]

i wrote this rhyme for this girl that i really care 4 a lot

I kno this girl from flushing queens//
an shes always runnin thru my dreams//
even in my dreams she dont say a word//
i'd jus be happy if she hey herb//
she got beautilful green eyes//
addicting like a weed high//
to hear her laugh once//
i'd do half assed stunts//
even if i made an ass out of myself in public//
as long as it got her 2 smile i'd love it//
i sit here hopin a yo on the real no jokin//
if it wasnt for her i'd still be smoking//
an no fronting you made me fell like a suptin//
when every1 else saw nutin//
look what you done to me//
made me see what i could be//
make me feel like a somebody//
an i kno im a piece of trash//
jus wish the lil greek gal gimme a chance//
its like beauty an the beast//
an i kno i dont deserve the girl from greece//
an even if she aint interested//
i kno this time was wisely invested//
i have to let you kno im for real//
i wrote this rhyme vicky to tell u how i feel

[Jimmy Cash]

not really lyrical but i could relate to it, good shit

[T.J.]

not bad.... i saw it as more of a poem than a keystyle..... but not bad