~:: ·SiNiStEr· ~vS~ Maestro ::~ Heavyweight Challenge!!!

[Maestro Minded]

Max 16 Bars
First To 7 Votes
Due To Thursday The 21:th
NO BITCH VOTES (Only Explained Votes Allowed)

[Maestro Minded]

{~Personals~}
~ Sin’s like a bad version of Maestro, with a "beta-rhyming-kit" - equipped with punches, more patterned than "zeta-claiming-six"// *1
~ Running & hiding, unaware of my "masses-vital-range" - he's making "history" by bein a part of the "fastest-title-change"// *2
~ Claiming multis? don’t fool yourself with "three-syllables-rhymes" - check my logs to learn to spit "real-flammable-mines"// (mines as in landmines) *3
~ Its funny the way you're forced to "rip-styles" to "catch-a-win" - I "snatch-ya-chin", throwin you away like "garbage", just to "smack-ya-bin"//*4

{~Lyrical~}
~ Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"//
~ 'Blinding his rhymes', he cant see me, like he "met-invisible-man - telepathically, infiltratin infrastructures, to rip his "meta-physical-can"//
~ I "let-my-impeccable-plan", rip his 'face of' quicker than "Nicolas-Cage" - kickin his ass off a plane, like watching "Icarus'-staged"// *5
~ My "intellectual-forces" "with-impeccable-courses" - makes him 'gallop of the track' like "incompatible-horses"//

{~Punchez~}
~ Racing towards each over, Sin avoids "the-collision-course" - cuz even with an army, he couldn’t stop my "de-molition-force"//
~ Bars way "above" his level when Maestro’s aiming "meta-forces" - killing Sin rawer than TX with deadly "meta-morphic"// *6
~ I'll "let-tha-loss-hit" like iron bricks, "dipped-in-venom" - even if he were Copperfield, he couldn’t  "trick-this-phenom"//
~ Only way he's "above" me is when "accepting-my-uppercut" - i could come half assed on this battle, still "affecting-this-fuckin-nut"//

{~Outro~}
~ Sin be "crawlin" like a coward ,when Maestro's "extracting-his-spine"//
~ Causing more chaos than turbulences, when "inflicting-these-crimes"//
~ Giving him a 'licence of an astronaut' by sending his ass "through-tha-cloudz"//
~ Sin's loosin this game, with mic skills like bad wrestlers talkin "to-the-crowds"//

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*1 zeta is the sixth letter in greek alphabet
*2 He've been a champ for around 1 week
*3 I've told him before, he need to work on his multis
*4 When battling Tone, he adapted his style partly, and he admitted that himself
*5 Icarus - Greek mythology, the man who wanted to fly to reach the sun with home made wings, but they melted and he fell and died
*6 Meta is greek and can be translated to: over, above, meta-morphic (metamorphosis) means "transformation"

[Maestro Minded]

Very nice, looks like you forgot your last line though or something.. I'm getting an unfinished vibe, did you forget a line?

aaaah.. shit... i left the last bar... well.. since sin havent spitten yet, ill take the opportunity  to add the last bar

[·SiNiStEr·]

~My brainstormz cause tidal-waves, submit Maestro a victim to upload and get his vitals-razed, have ya illiterate ass subject tah what my recital-says//
~Obfuscate ya holy being at an obtuse-rate, ya clutched in the grasps of sin, to-lose-is-gay so I made painstaking efforts for you to-lose-this-way//
~I see hes-in-mah-perception, time fah seizin-a-connection, trap and slice u in bits, Im cleavin-ya-section, niches-is-ya-destination like feces-in-mah-rectum//
~I-aint-seein-how you challenge me, I talked to overseer, my-cleavin's-allowed, U decomposin already, all I wanna hear from you is bye-Im-leavin-now//
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//
~All cuz I deciphered ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//
~We got our own obese superman, with a spewing fountain-in-lip-tonite, encountering-kryptonite, ya think ya rhymes are phat but in reality they just ammounting-cellulite//
~Visual reached, I found-another-queer, U just lucky I cant 'find it in me' to end-ya-career, but still able to round-up-ya-fear, ass rape you and mend-up-ya-rear//
~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]
~Push ya throne-back-tah-jersey, the 2nd exhibition of Cloud 9 ownage, Tones-attack-irks-me, even then I wont-lack-tha-mercy to laugh and watch you get thrown-back like mah-jersey//
 

[·SiNiStEr·]

[1] - talkin bout the delete key on your keyboard, to the northeast is the home key, on the globe sweden is northeast to USA.

As for personals, I dont feel like explainin every single one.. if u ever heard I-bo - Sit Back Relax you would know..

good battle m

pZ

[Maestro Minded]

~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//

sweden do not have a president, we have a king

[Maestro Minded]

one more thing to add...

since this is a title battle, i wish that elite & cloud~9 stays outta this... im sure sinister have the same point of view

[ONETIME]

First of all, mad props to you both, both of you came heated. Im gona vote fairly.

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Maestro:  DOPE VERSE MAN.  The flow was on point, i liked the way you switched your flow, and the whole scheme was amazin, ur personals/punches were on point and hard.

FAV LINES:
~ Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"//


~ Racing towards each over, Sin avoids "the-collision-course" - cuz even with an army, he couldn’t stop my "de-molition-force"//

it was sicc IMO

I-BO :  4.50

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Sinister:  YOU TOO MAN DOPE VERSE. You had a nice flow and everything,your multiz were real sicc. but after reading your rhymes it looked like that you were focusing on multiz alot and you didnt gave tht much attention to punches/personals, thts my opinion tho.....tite shite styll  

FAV LINES:

~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//

~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//

I really liked ya verse man it was also dope.

SINISTER :  4.45


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I have given it to I-BO because his had more heat and said everything in a pretty amazing way.  Sin's verse was dope but because of the length of his bars I found myself loosin the flow of the verse often and becomin bored whilst readin, which was not a good thing.  I-BO's verse was strong throughout and structure of the verse kept me entertained throughout.  Both verses where amazing no doubt but I-BO's just judged it for me.

WINNER:  I-BO

[NewJack]

Maestro:
Sick verse. The flow on this was perfect, and you had pretty good multis and wordplay. The punches and personals were really nice too.

Sinister:
Also had a sick verse. It seemed to me like you were concentrating too much on wordplay and multis and not as much on the flow, personals, and punches. The wordplay and multis were both great, but it wasn't nearly as strong maestro in the other areas.

You both put up dope verses, but I felt Maestro's a lot more. Don't get me wrong Sin, you had some hard punches, but I think Maestro came harder, and his was on point in every aspect.

Close, but Maestro took this one.

You don't have to count mine if you don't want to, because I don't ever keystyle or anything, but without crew votes, it's gonna take AWHILE to get to 7.

[|JEM|ILL|]

I-bo...Fav Part

~ Racing towards each over, Sin avoids "the-collision-course" - cuz even with an army, he couldnt stop my "de-molition-force"//
~ Bars way "above" his level when Maestros aiming "meta-forces" - killing Sin rawer than TX with deadly "meta-morphic"// *6
1st bar is just plain weak...no point just a filler to both parts...2nd bar is better but still not ill as it could be...
~ I'll "let-tha-loss-hit" like iron bricks, "dipped-in-venom" - even if he were Copperfield, he couldnt  "trick-this-phenom"//
~ Only way he's "above" me is when "accepting-my-uppercut" - i could come half assed on this battle, still "affecting-this-fuckin-nut"//
All i got to say is that the first line is mega played. Speacially the Copperfield part...used by Whodini, Euro, Comon Sence, and maybe others...first part of the 2nd bar is played a little bit but a dope filler as it is... second line could have been made better...[/color]




I-Bo::: Come on man... Anyway this battle verse could have been so much better if you flipped some of the punches you had presently and just gave um the 1-2 sting... I practically gave up on the flow in the first part but the syllable s picked up and the flow got better leading up to the closing rhymes... Personals ehhh, weren't super great but they were there so that'll count as something in my mind. Some forced multies to the extreme you dont have to have multies in every line like that but if you do try workin with the rhyme scheme to pick the flow up and give it a more natural feeling. Wordplay was as I saaw very played on your part and needed much more consideration in the creativity department...

Sin...Fav Line

~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//

Hmmmm...Some good some bad neh? Anyways 65% of ya verse was fillers...That really really needs to be cut down, sometimes you need to hurry up and get to the point nah mean? Flow was so stretched it was siccening BUT ya multies were hot i caught maybe one of them forced but it got back into place with the next line. Punches maybe 2 hott ones 2 mediocre and some weak bull shit, but the one that really counted and was good and hard hitting was a personal and a good one at that had me laughin for a good minute. Wordplay I saw one potentially but i almost seemed you where dissing your self in the process of trying to execute it. but not a bad verse.

Complexity: Ibo more consitent tho Sin had better multis...
Punchlines: Sinister...
Wordplay: Ibo Tho played it was executed better...
Personals: Sinister...
Hardest: Sinister...
Humour: Sinister...

4-2...

Ibo
Rating::: 2.23/5.0 [/b]

Sin
Rating::: 3.1/5.0[/b]

[size=8]VOTE : SINISTER[/size]

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[EDITED BY MAESTRO]

[Maestro Minded]

*PURGED*

keep the beef outta this thread

[·SiNiStEr·]

thats 1-2.. keep em comin.. bez, where u at?

[.:DayGoStyLz:.]

lol@ Jems ratings...

[bez]

First of all ya'll dope battle.  Some of the best wordplay I have ever seen in a battle on WCC was in this one so I give you both props for that.  BOth rhymes where very good and I have struggled alot to figure out which one I liked better but I finally got there so lets get to it....

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Maestro:  Holy shit mate, this verse was dope.  The wordplay in this verse was amazing, although sometimes I didnt really understand what you where getting at I still thought that it was dope they way you used complicated words and combinations in your rhyme.  I do think you over used it a bit though, I mean sometimes I was reading some of your bars and thinkin what the hell is he going on about, saying all stuff about meta forces and all this left me wondering where the hard punches where and shit.  

You had some nice punches in there tho, but not really many hard hitting ones.  Your multies where very dope and your flow was awesome so I give you credit for that.  THe one thing I didnt like was the whole greek thing, what was that about?  I thought you could of come up with something better than using greek words and meanings to fill up your rhyme.

The outro and personels part of your rhyme could of been worked on a bit more, the personels where hardly personels and the outro just seemed to end the whole verse a bit weakly IMO.  

Never the less I thought the verse was fire, flowed amazing, wordplay was dope, multies where dope and on point, apart from one or two, personels where ok and punches where ok, thats where your verse lacked IMO.  

Fav Lines:

~ Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"//

~ My "intellectual-forces" "with-impeccable-courses" - makes him 'gallop of the track' like "incompatible-horses"//

~ Only way he's "above" me is when "accepting-my-uppercut" - i could come half assed on this battle, still "affecting-this-fuckin-nut"//

SCORE:  4.50

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Sinister:  This verse literally blew me away.  I loved everything about it, the flow, the wordplay, the punches, multies, everything about it was amazing IMO.  The flow wasn't really helped by the big bars but unlike some other people on the keystyle boards I am able to read the big bars in one breath and that means the flow for me was there and it was dope.  

Your multies as always where dope, you came off very hard and they wasn't used just for the fuck of it, they where used to enhance the verse and make it flow and rhyme better and quicker and IMO it worked very well indeed.  Unlike Maestro's verse your verse relied on straight hard hitting shit where as his releyed on more of an intelligent side of things.  I am not saying your verse lacked any intelligence at all but I am just saying that whilst reading it I understood it more and actually because it was a tad more simplier I liked it a bit more.  

Your verse painted some good clear pictures in my head and it provided me with everything I need in a good keystyle battle.  Style, flow, complexion, multies, hard punches, not to many personels in there, but you made up for that with your good punches.  This verse IMO is one of the best I have ever read.  

Fav Lines:

~I see hes-in-mah-perception, time fah seizin-a-connection, trap and slice u in bits, Im cleavin-ya-section, niches-is-ya-destination like feces-in-mah-rectum//

~All cuz I deciphered ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//

~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]

~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//

~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//

We got our own obese superman, with a spewing fountain-in-lip-tonite, encountering-kryptonite, ya think ya rhymes are phat but in reality they just ammounting-cellulite//

Score 4.75

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I have given this battle to Sin because I thought his verse held all of the vital parts of a good keystyle verse and more.  Maestro's verse was also very dope and I thought it proberly couldent be matched but Sin matched it and beat it IMO.  His verse was straight up heat and it to me was a better verse than Maestros, not by much, but still better.

WINNER:  SINISTER

[da_notorious_mack]

i vot sinister...i will put up an explained vote in an hour or two.....im ina hurry at da mo...