It's Endless

[Reef]

Its a song im workin on right now.. Its gonna be a bit rough and sketchy but just tell me what you think, and see what ya think..

endless sleepless nights, livin in fear
endless arguements, nothin is clear
endless cryin', sheadin' a solotary tear
endless wishin', i dont wanna be here

ayyo, i aint got a borken home, but i feel like im livin alone
come back from college and work everyday.. into the unknown
i dont remember the time when i looked forward to sittin down
in front of the TV, without bein in the middle of a row
dragged in and out of everything like i was an object
and i object to the lack of respect i recieve
im sixteen years old, livin at home, but i wanna leave
people try and help, but you cant understand how i believe
that im stuck here by myself
i wish you could see the situation iscolated, by itself
tryin' to live this live that i created
but everything around me is fake, gold plated
its only what i make of the situation
sometimes i wish someone could blank out my creation
but i hold one reservation, that my education will prevail

endless sleepless nights, livin in fear
endless arguements, nothin is clear
endless cryin', sheadin' a solotary tear
endless wishin', i dont wanna be here

how am i supposed to survive,
when really i hope i dont stay alive
love is keepin me in this world, love for the people around me
Simmo & Caspa found me, they're proud of me
and my girlfriend with all the bullshit she's allowed me to put her through
dreams of a wife and kids
shattered by the thought that i might do what my parents did
and as i speak, the future looks bleak
the sounds of raised voices are muffeled by children playin and makin choices
about which games to play, if only i was that young
maybe i could find the right words to say

endless sleepless nights, livin in fear
endless arguements, nothin is clear
endless cryin', sheadin' a solotary tear
endless wishin', i dont wanna be here

[Jimmy Cash]

nice to see you back active, reefa

[bez]

nice man, yer good to see ya posting again, rhyme wasn't bad, wasn't amazing tho either.  

[da_notorious_mack]

i wuz feelin it...it ainty always bout the complex rhyme schemes...sometime emotion stands out more that that shit...that the case hea...i wuz feelin it as i can relate ta some a that shit...7/10