Author Topic: Which Verse Won?  (Read 101 times)

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Which Verse Won?
« on: September 11, 2003, 02:07:21 PM »

Verse 1

..Intro..
I'll Leave Ya Red Like A Used Tampax While I Glaze Ya Thorax Wit Anthrax, Cause The Only Time You'll See Me Is When I Leave Ya Face White Like Stamp-Tracks..

..Get Off Of Me..
…Punch ya Chess wit Enuff Force to leave ya Back Hurt..No Punches u Take these Slaps First..
Dyna Not Ill? Shit! Only time I’m Found wit a ‘Trace-of-Wackness’ is when I ‘Stencil-Holo-VERSE’!!
…have ya ‘Hands Burnin’ for ‘Hotness’ like ‘Touchin Heaters’..Lungs’ll Flinger..
cuz Dyna ‘MisHandlin Holo’ like ‘Careless GunSlingers’
…Show No Gimmics..Yeah ur ‘OK-on-the-Keyboard’!! OOPS!! I just ‘Foretold-ya-Limit’..(Ouch)
Blows’ll-End-this..when I ‘Take-out-this-KID’ b4 his ‘Life Starts’ Faster than ‘Abortion Clinics’!!
…Neva Step-to-Me!! Or I’ll Wreck-ya-B..like ‘Money Chess’ u get ‘Checked-than-Leave’!!
Holo Winnin? Shit! That’s ‘Incorrect’! like ‘Retards-Anwerin-Questions’ on ‘Jeopardy’!!

Your Dead Kid

…*Dreams Of Pinned Bugs* and ‘Imagined Tactics (Tack Ticks)’, *Stretching Too Far* can cause ‘Snapped Elastics’, *You Perfect*?? I’ll *Fuck Your Mom* and then after ‘Relax In Practice’ (Practice Makes Perfect!!)… ‘Wrapped In Plastic’, *Like Mules* most of the time you just ‘Half Ass It’, I *“W” By Heart And Soul (Sole)* like *Wisconsin Shoes* and ‘Badgers Jackets’!!
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Verse 2


Ya rhymes "grab ass", it's "hard" to keep da perv~supressed//
Ludicrous observed~in~text, your "pieces" sound disturbed~at~best//

Concured~a~mess, my "call-out" became a herb~request//
Serve~ya~chest wit "reflective shots" dat will blur~ya~vest//

U don't deserve~da~rest.............u only make "small cuts", short~incisions//
In a sports~division, u da prick that makes abort~decisions//

Forfeit~in~vision............."lose is tossed" into ya face, sight~is~blind//
Apparent? quite~in~rhymes "battlin' a veteran", need to fight~his~kind//

I might~decide................since he's da "4th down", a quick~conversion//
Whack attempts~are~mergin' he's "lyrically weak", he couldn't split~a~virgin//

I admit~ya~hurtin'............foes below dat I opposed, "underground assasins", they got jobs~to~blow//
That's my problem?~no!!! "Bitch harbor~yo", you even scared to rob~a~hoe//

Pussy blitz~then~theif? please he couldn't dip his dick~in~beef//
Legend? U'll be a myth~at~least wit 'Young Gunz shootin' blanks' like Chris~n~Neef//

Constricted~creep, "gat" have "X's" on ya "eyes", restricted~heat//
Inflict~da~meat, fag "cap ya ass" like "50 Cent" and hit~da~cheek//

"R.I.P.", it's what~I~do, go ta sleep we want~ya~to//
Moist~ya~crew, leave ya under "6 feet" looks like u have Da Royce~by~few//

Finisher-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
Mustard~seeds will have ya bust~ur~spleens, ya "soft inside" you custard~squeeze//
Desert Storm hoar, it such~does~seems u just were dust~wit~ease//
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bez

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Re:Which Verse Won?
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2003, 02:33:11 PM »
Is this a battle or what cos if it is it should be on the battle board.
 

LP

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Re:Which Verse Won?
« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2003, 02:35:34 PM »
Yea but on another board.. but I want ur opinons on who won..
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bez

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Re:Which Verse Won?
« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2003, 02:41:39 PM »
I felt the second verse more, had alot of dope punches in there.