Author Topic: Traped In Pain (Read 92 times)

SkillZ · « **on:** September 16, 2003, 01:38:14 PM »

I get lonely some times, at-home-crying sat-alone-
trying, to fight-my-tear's an at night-I-hear, my self
falling-apart an it gets to the point where I can hear
my soul calling-my-heart, but I've grown use-to-pain
I can barly see myself anymore funny cause my
views-the-same, I just can't seem to focus or use-my
-brain, I can hear screams-for-help thinking this most
be a dream-or-else, I've lost-my-mind, its like a race
I was tossed-in-blind an now I'm lost-behind, too hard
to ask-for-help, I walk with a smile to mask-my-health,
dont want another-pulled-in, but some times I wish I
could walk in anothers-soles-skins... it gets-that-hard,
an I know I shouldn't but I wish some one else would
get-that-card, I'm just tired of faith working-me-so-long
if you listen you can hear pain there lurking-in-slow-
song's or maybe I'm scared i'm followed it most-be, I've
been traped in this so long behind locked doors I had
to teach myself how to trust-key's ...

I got bored so I thought i would throw some thing different out

vitodeluca · « **Reply #1 on:** September 16, 2003, 01:45:01 PM »

Nice, good rhyme scheme, introspective subject matter, real tight man. Good stuff, nice change from the usual. Trapped is spelled with two p's by the way.