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SkillZ
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SkillZ
Traped In Pain
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September 16, 2003, 01:38:14 PM »
I get lonely some times, at-home-crying sat-alone-
trying, to fight-my-tear's an at night-I-hear, my self
falling-apart an it gets to the point where I can hear
my soul calling-my-heart, but I've grown use-to-pain
I can barly see myself anymore funny cause my
views-the-same, I just can't seem to focus or use-my
-brain, I can hear screams-for-help thinking this most
be a dream-or-else, I've lost-my-mind, its like a race
I was tossed-in-blind an now I'm lost-behind, too hard
to ask-for-help, I walk with a smile to mask-my-health,
dont want another-pulled-in, but some times I wish I
could walk in anothers-soles-skins... it gets-that-hard,
an I know I shouldn't but I wish some one else would
get-that-card, I'm just tired of faith working-me-so-long
if you listen you can hear pain there lurking-in-slow-
song's or maybe I'm scared i'm followed it most-be, I've
been traped in this so long behind locked doors I had
to teach myself how to trust-key's ...
I got bored so I thought i would throw some thing different out
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vitodeluca
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Re:Traped In Pain
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September 16, 2003, 01:45:01 PM »
Nice, good rhyme scheme, introspective subject matter, real tight man. Good stuff, nice change from the usual. Trapped is spelled with two p's by the way.
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September 17, 2003, 01:01:48 AM »
Word.. a real nice change from the usual man.. You presented ya feelings in a dope way.
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Miss NWA Whoorider
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October 02, 2003, 10:45:39 AM »
real dope
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