New Bz Mak Song... Peep It

[P Nelson]

http://www.soundclick.com/bzmak

I just recorded a new song home, some ghetto quality tho, thats some laid back alkohol shit, it's the story of a guy who's trying to stop drinking but he cant , peep it and tell me what you think of it

[P Nelson]

Uppin

[DJ_Jay_Deee]

To tell you the truth, i wasn't feeing this at all. Didn't like ur flow. You also need to work on ur clarity. The lyrics are alos pretty weak.

[P Nelson]

Yea, the song aint all that of a lyrical song, it's just a story of a guy who can not stop drinking, I recorded this at home, thanks for the feedback tho

[T.J.]

man this song would have been so much better if u rapped it with more emotion in ur voice..... u sound like u were forced to make this track

[P Nelson]

Aight kool keep the advices coming, ill record this song in the studio soon

[T.J.]

oh yeh, if u gonna record this track in a studio, i think u should pick a different beat too, this one didnt really match what u were rappin about

[BL7]

This song would've been better if you were a little more hyped up. It's still funny though, but that beat is kinda weird.

[P Nelson]

Lol I think it's official that I will got to be more hyped up saturday or whenever I record this song for real..., Yea not a "Serious" type of song