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da_notorious_mack

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verse ova maestro beat..
« on: October 12, 2003, 02:56:11 PM »
sorry to maestro that i neither asked permission but i luved this beat...hope you aint mind...anyway could i get sum feed..it titled freestyle...


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Re:verse ova maestro beat..
« Reply #1 on: October 12, 2003, 04:17:14 PM »
it waz aight....seems u still aint dubbin it....just spittin it 1 time and not layerin it....tha mixing still needs major work.....but it waz aight, better than tha battle shit....keep at it....


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Re:verse ova maestro beat..
« Reply #2 on: October 12, 2003, 04:19:45 PM »
it waz aight....seems u still aint dubbin it....just spittin it 1 time and not layerin it....tha mixing still needs major work.....but it waz aight, better than tha battle shit....keep at it....




yeah i aint really understand all dat shit so i jus spit it in one take...somebody needta explain this shit to me...
 

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Re:verse ova maestro beat..
« Reply #3 on: October 19, 2003, 01:20:22 PM »
u name it freestyle but don't seem like one seem kinda like read and low energy to me... not bad though hit me up later if u want some more advise


 

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Re:verse ova maestro beat..
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2003, 01:22:06 AM »
The lyrics ain't bad, but like other dudes said it wasn't put together right. Plus you don't really have ya own persona goin' for you. Sounds like you just readin' it straight off the page.