Eeemotional Gangsta??

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Something to be avoided, with a high toxicity//
In your head my name embroided, proposity-t//
Im poetic, sometimes im so-vile gangsta//
I dont act thug, when some do coz the profile has-ya//
I dont live upto a stereo-typical view of my-self//
I just spit, and fuck hypo-critical views, i watch my-health//
If i kept it all in, and just made up some lyrics//
I'd be commited with hourly family visits//
I dont rap for the fun-of-it, i do coz i have-to//
Every day argueing with some-bitch, yea thats-you//
All the stress i be facing every-day//
Im not new to this catergory, not light, but heavy-weight//
A straight writer, because it removes the pain//
Otherwise i'll fall like rain, pull outta myself, like muscle strain//
Every thought conflicts with my brain, do ya'll recognise the symptoms?//
Or are you just paranoid or having hallucinagenical visions?//
Is that even a word, or have i just made it up//
I dont know what im writing, the stress got me fucked//
I know ya'll hear me and it hits where it should//
I just wanna be recognised, and simply understood//
I aint out to compete, nor am i an enemy to peeps//
Im so afraid of my own shadow, i sleep under the sheets//
Ya'll hear me, but all i'll get is a well done//
Im fighting for heaven again, before hells won//

^^ this sorta goes a tad off topic, but who cares?? a ryhmes a ryhme.. dont see ludacris being told his raps dont make sense! lol...

Anyways feedback ... plz!

[kickz_deluxe]

i like da way u spit n yo message.
i c u say sumthin cuz i think so n u dont say sumthin just to say sumthin.

tight shit, but i know u could write a few parts better