Author Topic: Survivin Da Struggle (Read 188 times)

maximus · « **on:** December 22, 2003, 11:03:35 PM »

I moan-cries, a man i stand but mentally ima kid of da grown-kind
Been shown-crimes,but my strugle ainton streets its my own-mind
I lost-mother, then my bro learnt crime comes at a cost-brother
Im not-gutter, but i need wrists in shackles 2 escape my box-cutter
Inspite-of-the-kiss, my girls love couldn help me hide-from-the-shit
The height-of-al-this, is every nite ive gotta knife-to-my-wrist
I had-gats, in confused violence i got a rush of bashin fag-cats
Its sad-that, god gave us free will but suicide is such a bad-act
I cant sleep-now, is it all bad? or am i a loser no1 wants 2 meet-now
My peeps-frown, coz the light at the end of my tunnel is 6 feet-down
Money?i neva-have-got, for 18 years my lifes been teethered-2-rocks
Am i better-or-not? if lifes a gift then its the worst Xmas pressie i eva-have-got
I need-the-scy, take me 2 heaven my worlds fulla greed-n-lies
I feed-my-mind, dat if suicide wasn a sin id cut myself till i bleed-n-die

maximus · « **Reply #1 on:** February 07, 2004, 06:05:18 PM »

damn this got slept on

bez · « **Reply #2 on:** February 07, 2004, 06:24:04 PM »

That was sum seriously dope shit.

AlerG · « **Reply #3 on:** February 08, 2004, 03:29:17 PM »

wow i never seen that shit when it was posted...probably cause it was right in the x-mas season...anyway nice verse, it was deep with nice wordplay, props on that, peace.

TiNmaN · « **Reply #4 on:** February 09, 2004, 03:57:49 PM »

Quote from: AutoMatik1 on February 07, 2004, 06:05:18 PM

damn this got slept on

Yea, like most keystylez now a dayz. that was a dope drop tho, propz n keep em comin

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #5 on:** February 10, 2004, 08:18:55 AM »

Props mayne.. auto the multis were nice.. i liked em and felt em.. a uptown version of my keys.. lol i mean that in a good way.. i just go into more depth.. just the way i flow.. keep blessing. i mean the same as mine interms of topic.. lol anyways ima shut up..

·SiNiStEr· · « **Reply #6 on:** February 10, 2004, 09:21:34 AM »

Quote from: Indecisive on February 10, 2004, 08:18:55 AM

Props mayne.. auto the multis were nice.. i liked em and felt em.. a uptown version of my keys.. lol i mean that in a good way.. i just go into more depth.. just the way i flow.. keep blessing. i mean the same as mine interms of topic.. lol anyways ima shut up..

u on speed?