Author Topic: ++ Rethorichal E-motion ++ (Read 163 times)

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **on:** February 18, 2004, 04:27:00 PM »

Why she gotta feel like this? she's had shit before/
Insteada leaving her alone saiten, you dealt her some more/
What for? gotta grudge, or see her as vunerable/
Well ima let down my guard help her out be honourable/
I've felt the ripples of the pain you've revealed/
I've seen people cover it up and hide what they've concieled/
Altho not a pretty site, when you see the out come/
Kids, and Young mums, suicide victims, theirs now none/
How come? a happy home, now slum, they give up early/
Im praying to god to give her some peace, hopefully he heard me/
Shit i've sat in my room alone, hearing nothing but shouting/
Feeling that the tears and heart-ache to my souls not helping/
The stress on her shoulders, the weight making her top heavy/
Emotional parents, their feelings well she's not got many/
None left to spare, she gotta use em to her advantage/
Wisely trust them, try to avoid all of the carnage/
I've felt her pain, i've witnessed blood shedding/
Heaven or hell, shit i dont know where my mums heading/
Coz she's had to do bad to do good, stopped good to stop fate/
If i help her now, will this all work out, or am i too late?/
I'll wait and jump on her band wagon, and give her a free-ride/
Put her on a sloap of happy waves, like she went down a sea-slide/
Give her the chance of love that she was de-nied/
Coz saiten, he-lied, tried taking her soul, and giving her nothing/
I wanna take away all her heart ache, atleast i've done something/
Insteada helping her out first time round, i waited to hear it echo/
Now i've realised i need my mother more than ever, you wont see me let go/
I'd put myself on deathrow, just to see her smile without faking it/
I'd give her free will love, and emotion, insteada her making it/
Giver her something without her doing it her-self/
I love her to death, we argue but i still look out for her health/
I gotta be careful now, she's getting the feeling of neglect again/
Ima make sure she keeps on to a feeling, before nothings left in the end/

^^ just a poem, about my mum.. she going through some shit at the moment.. just thought i'd write up my feelings.. its just me and her at the moment. so its a struggle.. but we're helping each other out!

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #1 on:** February 24, 2004, 03:30:34 AM »

*bump bump* c'mon ya'll peeps aint sleeping.

kickz_deluxe · « **Reply #2 on:** February 27, 2004, 12:22:14 AM »

wow....ur mum can b lucky to have such a kid
i wish i could say tha same bout ma mum n me...
whatever...u got a big talent to express whut u feel
respect!