T.J. VS HaMMer - vote

[T.J.]

15 lines
drop whenever

[TiNmaN]

y

[T.J.]

because i called out and you accepted, maybe?

[TiNmaN]

lol my bad doode, that waz a total misprint.......

May have a few things in common, some similarites//1
Dont get shit twisted, aint given shit, name aint chariety//2
White boy w/ battlin skillz n chunks, now thats a true rariety//3
Starvin 4 clariety, like 7 dayz ah' lent//4
High n totally bent, like tha skies flown by clark kent//5
Not Jesus christ, but heaven sent//6
Concernd on my hustle to a heavy extent//7
Keep it real, alwayz represent, whateva ya belive-in//8
Constantly acheiven, Cold heat, never grieven//9
Heaven, with a relabile ass reason ta mke ya stop breathin//10
Mad dog eyeball like a nerd that heavy readin//11
Religion needin, cuz your about die, eternal bleedin//12
Killen season, for any newbie-Mark//13
Catch ya in traffic, n my mosberg bark//14
Fuka goat, imma shark, red dot point on ya like-a exclamation mark//15

Your deatth iz tha finality, no question marks.....

My bad it took so long, been busy n shit, look 4ward to your verse.....

[T.J.]

i'll get straight to the point, no subliminal punches/
your shit's the bare minimum like criminal's lunches/
seer let you back in, but why? you might've blown him/
man seriously, besides jemuel, who bites a poem?/
hammers get bent out of shape, plus bullets penetrate thru tin/
plus, somewhere over the rainbow theres a tent to rape you in/
lyrically you'll "crash and burn", like passin out with a joint in ya hand/
spread your ash from an urn, so full of shit you're enjoyed by the plants/
you need a change of lifestyle, maybe Queer Eye can help you/
stop rappin altogether, before your lack of skills comes back n belts you/
u've got less of a chance here than child rapists convicted to prison/
my lyrics unite with natural disaster, you gettin ripped in a blizzard/
i can make you like Ray Charles, constantly smacked till you turn blind/
yeah my verse is one line short, because your whackness drew the line/

[T.J.]

we need votes

[·SiNiStEr·]

Tinmanp - your flow was dope and i like the very consistent metaphors and your punches were aight against TJ..

Wanksta - probably the best battle verse i've ever seen from you, multis all bangin, personals, flow, metaphors all were on point, maybe u got some inspiration..

Both were real good battle verses but TJ came with the personals and had a lil better content with his verse, tinman i wouldnt expect him to come that hard either, wanksta u just dropped a dope verse..

Vote - TJ

[T.J.]

vote

[.:TimeLock:.]

i pretty much agree with sin^^  Tinman had some good punches and what not but none seem to be as direct as TJ's... see TJ had more personal type shit packed in his verse so i just felt his more cuz of that

Vote- TJ

[Kill]

I'ma go with TJ's too...the rhymes were a bit better and he had sum personals in there. You both had a good flow and sum nice metas

VOTE = T.J.

[TiNmaN]

I think u K-Oed me. Good verse man, i honestly didnt think it would b that hard to beat u but u end up koin me lol thatz my bad. But for real, showed skillz w that verse, nice battle.......

[T.J.]

thanks for underestimating me, LOL. nah j/k man,, good battle lad. now i gotta write a verse 4 timelock