Author Topic: My Feelings (Read 92 times)

Dreamz · « **on:** February 26, 2004, 08:02:56 PM »

My heart is torn in every way possible//
To put it back together seem impossible//
I try to say the thing at the right time//
But the words fall thourgh like slime//
So why am I here talking about my situation//
writing rhyme is the only way to deal with frustration//
There are a few I love with all my heart//
But to give them feeling is to rip me apart//
When I see them my hearts lifts like a rocket//
When they leave my heart gets torns by the sprocket//
I say my prays to keep them safe and sound//
Every day and night I wish I was around//
I want to be there to feel their pain//
To be there every day to entertain//
But then reality hits me and i see the truth//
That one day I will lose them and my youth//
These feeling are for the ones I love//
To be with one I wish for help from the heavens above//
Life has so many turns, and it is uncontrollable//
My feelings............................also uncontrollable//

OLD ACCOUNT PLZ DELETE INDY · « **Reply #1 on:** February 27, 2004, 04:36:53 AM »

A piece of class their.. ^^ you said something like..

To write a ryhme is the only way to deal with the frustration.. you dont know how true that is mayne! Thats the moto behind all my keys!

Keep blessing those skills..

Dreamz · « **Reply #2 on:** February 27, 2004, 08:34:32 PM »

yeah i agree
thanks

kickz_deluxe · « **Reply #3 on:** February 28, 2004, 10:05:42 AM »

great thing! u hit whut many people feel but whutz so difficult to express.
ma favorite passages:

My heart is torn in every way possible//
To put it back together seem impossible//

When I see them my hearts lifts like a rocket//
When they leave my heart gets torns by the sprocket//

I say my prays to keep them safe and sound//<--tighT!
Every day and night I wish I was around//

But then reality hits me and i see the truth//
That one day I will lose them and my youth//