Author Topic: Help (Read 172 times)

Noon Bank$ · « **on:** April 25, 2004, 04:53:44 PM »

I cant write for shit.. so Im asking you guys to write some shit for me.
There is a battle at one of my other forums and this guy seems to have called me out.

This is what he said..

Quote

What the fuck was that noob?
I can spit better while while I got my mouth wrapped on a boob.
Who taught you to speak
You sound moronic..
Best rewind your tape of Hooked on Phonics

It's time for you to pack it up, back it in..
Never begin again
You make me have to drop a verse like this so that you're thwarted
Now we'll all see that you're retarded

Break your pencil so you can't write more
Maybe use your verse-writing time to get you an e-whore
Have her virtually play with your nuts cuz you'll never have it
I see you in your parent's basement at 30..
Stroking your fuzzy white rabbit.

Time to go.. I have no time for you.
I'd be better off battling with some bum's stinky shoe
Forget about replying we all know it'll be wack
Feel free to come back when you grow a nut sack..

:chorus:
noooooob... he's a biiiiitchhhhh
nooooooob.. herpes make his balls itch

So I said..
you say im retarded? just look at your rhyme
its obvious that shit was just a waste of time
your lyrics is wack so motherfucker stop tryin'
i shouldn't even justify this cat by replyin'
but i got to cos you look familiar to me
i recognised you from the tape drinkin' R Kelly's pee
oh and that 'fuzzy white rabbit' line was totally weak
so put your brain into gear before you choose to speak

He then said..
That's all you got? That was wack.
Get your mouth off that hobo's nutsack
It's making you slur
Now sit back and wonder at my lyrical blur.

Dont like my lines? Doesnt bother me.
I'll spit so blindly you cant even see
Your head will be spinning like a top
Now I'm offering you a chance to stop

You'll get embarrassed.. you know you will
Better off poppin' a cyanide pill
You cant touch me and never could
Time for you to be a good boy and take off
You know you should...

I'll get my cat to bitch-slap you with his mutant toe
He'll flatten your nose make you look like an eskimo
Go back to your igloo young man because I've started
To leave you drooling on your keyboard and feeling retarded

Try to come up with something that has a TIGHT punchline.

Thanks

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc · « **Reply #1 on:** April 26, 2004, 10:36:58 AM »

Quote

What the fuck was that noob?
I can spit better while while I got my mouth wrapped on a boob.
Who taught you to speak
You sound moronic..
Best rewind your tape of Hooked on Phonics

It's time for you to pack it up, back it in..
Never begin again
You make me have to drop a verse like this so that you're thwarted
Now we'll all see that you're retarded

Break your pencil so you can't write more
Maybe use your verse-writing time to get you an e-whore
Have her virtually play with your nuts cuz you'll never have it
I see you in your parent's basement at 30..
Stroking your fuzzy white rabbit.

Time to go.. I have no time for you.
I'd be better off battling with some bum's stinky shoe
Forget about replying we all know it'll be wack
Feel free to come back when you grow a nut sack..

:chorus:
noooooob... he's a biiiiitchhhhh
nooooooob.. herpes make his balls itch

its wack, doesnt even got a flow,.....n sorry but i cant help....try to write somethin by yoself, you gotta flow at least...

peace

Leggy Hendrix · « **Reply #2 on:** April 26, 2004, 02:16:21 PM »

Quote from: Noon Bank$ on April 25, 2004, 04:53:44 PM

you say im retarded? just look at your rhyme
its obvious that shit was just a waste of time
your lyrics is wack so motherfucker stop tryin'
i shouldn't even justify this cat by replyin'
but i got to cos you look familiar to me
i recognised you from the tape drinkin' R Kelly's pee
oh and that 'fuzzy white rabbit' line was totally weak
so put your brain into gear before you choose to speak

damn...thats a dope ass rhyme...who wrote that shit?

oh thats right, it was me...lol

da_notorious_mack · « **Reply #3 on:** April 26, 2004, 02:29:47 PM »

go peep my last battle...copy an paste my verse..you have my full bless'n lol

tru2thabeat · « **Reply #4 on:** April 26, 2004, 03:56:21 PM »

Straight up, u don even need help homie... that dude sux a fuckin dick dog lol. I don give a damn if ur self conscious about ur shit or not, u better wreck his ass and rep for dubcc... and how u expect to get better if ur cheatin, takin other peoples shit. The only way to improve is to keep practicin. Good luck wit all dat, holla back.

Primo · « **Reply #5 on:** April 26, 2004, 06:50:51 PM »

I usually choose to pop shit at a gay-few//
This kid like to 'blow large objects' like Timmy McVeigh-Do//
Dump you "fast off road' like that Colin McRae-Dude//
Aint no comin back from oblivion you be asking Tru to save-you//

Freeeeeestyle....I was listenin to a Fabulous song while doin that.LOL

*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc · « **Reply #6 on:** May 02, 2004, 06:16:44 AM »

Quote from: 2tru on April 26, 2004, 03:56:21 PM

Straight up, u don even need help homie... that dude sux a fuckin dick dog lol. I don give a damn if ur self conscious about ur shit or not, u better wreck his ass and rep for dubcc... and how u expect to get better if ur cheatin, takin other peoples shit. The only way to improve is to keep practicin. Good luck wit all dat, holla back.

...yea.. get sum practice...