Skillz V. Kickz Deluxe

[SkillZ]

10-15 bars
First wit 3 votes

I'll drop first

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

cool, i wanna see, whats then about!

[SkillZ]

Bitch, I deliver breaks like the kickz-commercials sick-wit-personals, like a appetizer but dont chase fruit like prision dicks-in-urinals/
But since this bitch-learnin-we'll stick coal in ya puss, let the chick-burn-untill she thick-firm-n-still then eat her off my dick,earned-the-meal!//

Now what about ya shits-deluxe eat ya like tricks-n-lucks I'ma cereal killer! n u n gums go 2gether like hicks-n-trucks jus a "hint-you-suck"/
You hang wit me? maybe lynched-you-fuck, First hit-you-struck now move'n in our battle less then likely... barly a inch-you-stuck//

Post first n still split ya verse half like kit-kat-bars, chewn... spit-back-charred now your welcome to step if you get-that-far!/
Cuz with these weights I'm pumpin doubt you could lift-that-bar Try, push ya pits-back, -arms, loose like ya lips thats lisp-n-part//

Only six bars yur welcome to do the same

[SkillZ]

Havnt battled in awhile not my best....

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

in some points i didnt understand what u talked bout
i should read it once again, ill tell u what i feel cool sooner!
 but it aint bad, lets
have a look what deluxe will spit back!

peace

[SkillZ]

i wouldnt expect you to get it lol, dont hurt yourself thinkin

[Dreamz]

where is kick's verse?

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

dont matter, i got now!  :-*

 ;D ;D ;D

[kickz_deluxe]

first to dreamz: i neither got tha time bein all time in the internet nor tha money...
whutever, @skillz: dont know wether ill drop only six bars, gotta look if im in tha mood writin more...well see

ok, my part:
Kickz up feedin this fidget with his cereal-snot needin less than one "skillz"-rinsin tingin  this bitchez material-rot from cerulean-to-crimson/
this foulmouthed fuck "skillin" got no protection of ma wordz wichz a "killin" linkin liquefaction of hoopincough-az-sprinklin/
dude, im golden,  u just tha  mute bronxcheer of a bronzbit outstripped after chemitypy/ (1)
yo shitz frontispiece kicked to tha curb , u wanna be in tha front line but flipping boring az spittin scorin a "front wheel drive", lil hisadidee/
but now letz do a grammatical phrase: yo winz POSSIBLE but MORE PROBALE`Z a medical certificate for plain-failz/
yo stuffz that miserable even with a doubl-platinum-stiker on it u couldnt sell enough to pay a night with two chained-baitz/
anyhow, it was rattlin-sick hearin a rappin-convict dude blurtin out hez an anthropoid-ape/
dont b unsettlin tha p servitude, vert yo verve back n gird up yo loinz-to-"yourlikez"-state/
damn, even your concentration -faint layz siege to ma nervez/
admirin your selfadmiration your paint advertz yo artz, indecisivez written on tha blurtz/ (2)

^^just one thing in the end^^
wait, this lil parrot wanted to join tha commercialz n lorez -of -kix/
such an arse outta tha arsenil az u are nooned miss, twigs, hez tha congenial of all vermiform-appendix/

(1)chemitypy: a process which etchz metals
(2)i read a few of skillz old battlez n saw he lost againt indy; finally itz a stupid line cuz tha more u write tha better u get, but just wanted to diminish his ego alil bit..mayb it worked

[kickz_deluxe]

VOTEZ PLZ

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

where r da votez?
     


 

[Kill]

ok, i haven't read it, if you want me to vote i will and give u a reason but if u think i'm too biased i won't waste my time on this...

[kickz_deluxe]

damn, didnt i say itz over? i dont think ur biased n even if i m sure u wont show it with teasin me or such shit, ya know?
finally we aint kids, are we?
so please give your vote n believe me, i wont say u was biased.  ...

peace

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

funny conversationz right here  

[Kill]

Ok Skillz, urs wasn't bad, nice to have u back here spittin, most of your multies worked, flow was ok. Some of ur punches were pretty good which makes sum of the other lines look a bit less well thought-out, but overall u hit a couple times and I liked ur shit

Kickz, last time my vote went to u but ur verse had the same weaknesses this one had and this time it was even a bit worse: I could not flow most of that shit and the multies often didn't really work. Also you use big ass words sumtimes but make no or little sense ("admirin his self-admiration" eg, or callin him a "anthropoid ape", that might be a dictionnary word, but the diss itself is lame). Rather keep ur words simple and hit with good multies (look at Mack's verses for example). I think you got potential but u need to work on sum technical aspects of writin...just sum advice

VOTE = SKILLZ