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[Dreamz]

Torn apart between heaven and hell, so I'll stay on earth//
Wait for my vision cause I'm on a quest for a rebirth//
Holding many dreamz and nightmares, enough to last me for life//
Had many struggles but need some help with strife//
I'm staying with the dreams and goals that i can reach//
I'm not a teacher but lesson to you I can teach//
I'll keep my head up in all the hard times to come//
Feel like I'm failing but there are many years to come//
I'm not a pimp, not a playa, I just speak how I feel//
Playing the game with the cards I was dealt so I'll deal//
My life can crumble at any moment so how can I be prepared?//
Many obstacles life throws at me but I stay never scared//
I'm not DMX so my bark is bigger than my bite//
No matter the situation I will stay and try my best to fight//
Everyone changes but I will remain loyal and true//
To hang with you I'll tell them straight and leave my crew//
Your face should never feel the tears of sarrow it should never//
Hey let me be me and you be you forever and ever//
Believe me when I say "I'll stay the same for you"//
But with a rebirth for everyone else I don't know what to do//
Like they say LIFE IS FILLED WITH CHOICES//
I will relax and listen to all the voices//
They speak and tell me theway to take//
If I pick one there will be no mistake//
A rebirth into a brand new entity a new soul//
My vision quest tells me to reach for my goals//

 
 

[Inspectah]

I'm not a pimp, not a playa, I just speak how I feel//
Playing the game with the cards I was dealt so I'll deal//

^^ tight ass lines my fav.part man.. i liked this piece, felt like one of mine  .. i like this sorta topical shit.. keep it coming, lyrically was good.. i think you'd do better with an aggressive look onna key, like my key about the girl that pissed me off.. cant think of what i called it straight off.

[Dreamz]

yo thanks

[Inspectah]

n/p

[Dreamz]

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