Author Topic: Consequences of Fate (Read 208 times)

Suffice · « **on:** March 23, 2004, 11:39:24 PM »

it was a saturday and i woke up late
hung over from the night before and full of hate
just a day before my homie and i got laid
and on the way back we crashed into an escalade
we got out of the the car but it was too late
cuz one of the bastards was caryin' a switchblade
There was 5 of them, and we were just two
and it was so fuckin hard to think of what to do
so finally i screamed "get yo ass back in the car"
and in a second we were rollin up the windows hard
so I start the engine, but the fuckin car won’t start
and my heart beatin’ so fast that I was fallin apart
Fuck, they had a tool, and they used it too
The side window shattered and my homie was doomed
Bleedin from the neck and about to die soon
I pull up to the hospital but they say they got no room
Fuck them, he’s already dead in a bloody pool
The rest of the day was not so cool
All I remember is throwin up from the barstool
I, musta drunk a gallon and acted like a fool
But that don’t matter now cuz my homie’s dead

When I woke up I didn’t’ even know how I got home
But then I remembered last night’s shit, I started to moan
Then I started to cry until my eyes were dry
How can I live with all that shit on my mind
Then I threw up again and started to bleed
Feeling fucked up and then revenge stated to feed
On my brain as I felt the need to succeed
In payin back those bastards for what they had done
I called sam and said I needed to borrow the gun
So now I’m on the way to pick it up and run
Into the escalade again, and have me some fun
I told sam everything that had happened
He cried too, and also wanted to get to clappin
But I, convinced him to stay and pray for me
Cuz today’s gonna be a make it or break it day for me
It was raining like a lake but I didn’t give a shit
I knew where the killers were at and I was ready to hit
Then I heard loud music and it even helped me a bit
Set me in the mood, and it was difficult to sit
Heart beatin like a drum, my cigarette lit
In this fit or rage I ain’t even scared a bit

Yo, so I pulled up to the curb of the street
Looked in their faces and I pulled out my heat
I think they were intimidated by it
Their countenance empty like a bottomless pit
All of a sudden I felt happy as shit
This is where the dick turns into a clit
These pussies were scared to be popped like zit
I have to admit, I was shakin a bit
Then I froze, didn’t say a word and pulled the trigger
Time stopped, I had turned into a killer
Then I pulled again, four times at the other four figures
My eyes were closed, felt like my liver got bigger
And my nuts became the size of the earth
Then I heard a cuss word and I cursed
Right back,
And I saw five men getting out of a Cadillac
Their faces straight, and their stares blacker than black
What the fuck’s going on? This shit is so wack
Where is the gun? And did it get jacked?
So I closed my eyes one more time for good luck
Turned my back, bent my knees, and I ducked
All I saw was emptiness cuz I knew I was fucked
But then I decided that I wouldn’t turn back time for a hundred bucks
Cuz all along my life just sucked

Inspectah · « **Reply #1 on:** March 24, 2004, 08:19:53 AM »

DOPE! Props man, this was heavy shit.. realll goood man, lyrically was tight too!

Suffice · « **Reply #2 on:** March 24, 2004, 02:42:01 PM »

thanks homie *Big Boi*

Suffice · « **Reply #3 on:** March 25, 2004, 11:23:29 PM »

hey guys, i need some feedback on this song, it's like my first full song that i ever wrote, so i'd appreciate some criticism. Tell me if it sucks , or if it's good, or whatever

·SiNiStEr· · « **Reply #4 on:** March 26, 2004, 09:20:13 AM »

I think it was a pretty dope verse.. ya bars were straight and the rhymes were there.. endin was a lil weird but i enjoyed readin it..

kickz_deluxe · « **Reply #5 on:** March 26, 2004, 10:56:26 AM »

wow, i just can repeat that it was a very big enjoy!
pleazzzzzze tell me when u do it in audio, cuz i just gotta hear it

peace

Suffice · « **Reply #6 on:** March 26, 2004, 11:54:08 PM »

wow, kickz, you serious? i actually recorded this one on tape to the Mobb Deep "Thug muzik" beat. it matches the time exactly, 3 minutes flat. i'll probably figure a way to layer it on the computer so i can make an Mp3

kickz_deluxe · « **Reply #7 on:** March 27, 2004, 01:15:14 AM »

of course im serious cuz, man, just tha fact that we had a battle n did fuck with each other doesnt mean that i dont like you...i got nuthin against you , finally i got no reason.
n to tha beat: yeah, i think the beat iz good for this, pleaze tell me when i can download it