Something Simple(FeedBack)

[Dreamz]

I have heard rumors about you but I do not believe them cause there not from you//
I have seen how you act it makes me all nervous so really what can I do//
You flirt with me and me with you but nothing is taken to the heart//
You ask so I told you the truth about me straight from the start//
We play around with words, but I do not know what they meant//
People told me that you are a heartbreaker but my heart can’t be bent//
Even though I want to be with you I realize that right now nothing will happen//
I will forever remember the days of the playful times at work to the day of slapping//
I’m going to respect you because you are one of the strongest girls that I know//
College, Work, being a mother, trust me all of your good qualities show//
I will pray for you and your son everyday and every night. So here listen//
Angels of north and south watch over the people that I be missing//
Dusk till Dawn protect them from pain and sorrow let it be never ending//
In this world there is a struggle please protect them let them do no fending//
When they sleep May their nightmare be destroyed by dreams of hope//
No need for plotting if we end up together fine if not then I will cope//
You can look out your window and wish upon a star or the moon//


It's not done yet....But it is just something I wrote at school..it's very simple....I just like some feedback...thanks