just rhymin bout shit

[skeetabugg314]

Keep ya head in a spin when I step-in-a-room/
wit metas like shrooms/
I'm bet'n-you-dudes/
You caint step up to the weapon-I-use/
I'm rep'n-the-Lou/
fuck stressin lessons, mess-up-ya-school/
I know no borders like a Mexican-crew/ (1)
I'll x-you-in-2/
If you talkin, you're the next-on-the-news/(2)
I piss you off like someone stepped-on-ya-shoes/
I beat niggas like confederate-dudes/ (3)
I'm tyter than them slaves necks-in-a-noose/
And I aint God but Skeetas blessin-ya-foos/
I'm 18, boi I'm the best-of-the-youth/
I'm on point dawg, I wreck-in-a-booth/
I get attention like some breast in a room/
They say I'm ill as niggas catchin-the-flu/
Niggas tryin to snatch my checks-like-some-food/
I guess they stupid or expectin-I'd-loose/
but nothin they do is affectin-my-juice/
Blast a nigga out his kicks-to-the-roof/
So keep frontin watch me mess-up-ya-tooth/
have ya grill wired shut like Kanye West-if-you-do/
So I suggest that you move/
I run the game like I've been reff'n it too/




(1)= some mexican families from mexico pay no attention to the U.S. border and sneak across it
(2)= meaning as if repoters found another dead body
(3)= confederates back in the day beat up black people and treated them unfairly

[AlerG]

you're trying to hard to come up with multi's and you end up saying nothing at all, peace.

[·SiNiStEr·]

actually that was pretty tight.. alerg i think u got it twisted.. if anyone cant rhyme wit multis its . . .

[skeetabugg314]

whatever man Ive seen you all rap...I dont think you should talk, mouse hole or whatever I saw your last post...that was weak. I wasnt gonna say ne thing about it but now that youre talkin i thought i should let you know. im not hatin or ne thing im just sayin how it is... you can battle me if you all want...lol that rhyme took like 5 min anyway.lol thanks for the props sinister

[AlerG]

damn you take criticism well,    peace.

[Code Blue]

I thought it was tight.

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

LOL...Why ya'll being so harsh on the dude? I've seen way whacker shit being dropped on this board, and nobody said shit.

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

whatever man Ive seen you all rap...I dont think you should talk, mouse hole or whatever I saw your last post...that was weak. I wasnt gonna say ne thing about it but now that youre talkin i thought i should let you know. im not hatin or ne thing im just sayin how it is... you can battle me if you all want...lol that rhyme took like 5 min anyway.lol thanks for the props sinister

no beef guyz,...i know how beef endz ----> shiiit!
but i can just tell you that i could neva come up wid such shit in 5 min...so propz 2 you at first, and i know i said thingz i aint prouf of and i messed it up wid
 shit ,cuz when i lokked into this board i would neva go in if there were shit like i wrote....cuz ma shit was and probably iz whack...but im tryin to look at shit from yall and tryna learn sumtin, you know,  ma english aint perfekt cuz it aint ma native language, but whatever,...forget it, im out of maintopic,....
i think yo shit iz pretty tight and if you keep on wid practice you will big up
peace

[skeetabugg314]

mouse howl look in the battle forum im settin it up

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

thanx for payin attention...

[da_notorious_mack]

i liked it...fuck the haters