quick spit!

[bez]

I roll up my sleeve, my wrist holds a motor-way-of-veins,
Life got me feelin I won't suceed, my lifes like a rotar-way-of-pain,
Got me wonderin wheather to slice-an-dice,
Cut the left then the right and I'll be twice-as-nice,
Hate the fact everythings going bad, feelin-really-pissed,
I want to end my pain, honest, I really-nearly-wished,
Cryin tears-of-sin, tryin to overcome my fears-to-win,
Check ma back and find knives and spears-wedged-in,
Bleedin-red-rivers, nearin-dead-shivers,
Cold settin in so I'm feelin-deaths-delivers,
Gotta escape the cause-of-ache, gotta run, but can't,
Ya can choose but ya can't pause-the-make, ya gotta live wit the fact ya paths are wrong!

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

its okay, but you already came up wid better shit, you know,...dis topic is cool, if you didnt it so quik it would be better, but for a quik spit its pretty good.
peace