5 minute pen..

[bez]

I don't know, what I came here for,
You say I blow, thats why I continue droppin more,
Most lyrical, most genious, flow can't be touched,
You'd see ma rhymes are fire if ya opened ya eyes and looked,
But I ain't one for bitchin, I just keep em comin,
Droppin hurdles for everyone to fall over but I keep runnin,
Whether it be a battle verse, or battle in tha street,
Ya better call the hurse cos ma styles so unique,
I'll be droppin lines about life, postin about differcult situations,
If you don't like, fine, but I'll keep droppin mine for them minor apprecations,
It ain't for credit that I post, its for self satisfaction,
You wanna credit my flows, go ahead, diss em, expect a reaction,
Cos I take nothing to serious, I feel my flows imperious,
You don't agree well ya must be like Murphy and be delirious,
See, I can deliver rhythm on any level, whether beats or lyrics,
Bringin hype shit to fight wit, whatever beats ya spirits,
So understand I'm a hard hitter, find a keystylish who's whittier,
Never a quiter, I'm gunna stay to make all ya'll feel shittier!

[vitodeluca]

Ayight Bez, Imma be real with you a minute.  Now you know I don't like beefin and I've always tried to provide constructive crit and help when I could, because people did that for me when I was starting out.  I'm also not saying I'm the best, I mean shit, sometimes I feel like I'm the worst in my crew (attention keystylers, use that as a diss!) but the reason people been saying your rhymes are no good is because you don't continue to try and elevate ya skills.  If you look at some of the really tight lyricists (not battlers) on this board, they come with some ill metaphors, imagery and wordplay, while maintaining a tight flow.  Like peep some of blade's ish, or even some of maxi's keys.  Your rhymes are alright, but it's nothing fresh, nothing that hasn't been done before a million times.  Like when you say "you guys are jokes, you know I flows the most" I mean, that's playschool man.  Also, some of your punches are somewhat played.  There was a point in the battle against you whe I was gonna use the line
"Bez text is teeming with techs, but the only time he bus caps is when he's screamin' in text"
but the shit has been used before, ya know?  So I left it out.  Whereas, and again I'm only using this as an example because it comes into my head easily, when I say "I'm getting berated by a b rated rapper throwin fits like a b rated actress" I feel it's dope because I used the same word three times basically with three different meanings but it still made sense and made a point.  That to me is a lyrical line.  Just saying "my styles so unique" I mean, Eric B and Rakim were doing that ish years ago, ya know?  I'm just telling you this for your own benefit, you can take or leave the advice, or write another key dissin me, but I'm trying to help...PZ

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

I don't know, what I came here for,
You say I blow, thats why I continue droppin more,
Most lyrical, most genious, flow can't be touched,
You'd see ma rhymes are fire if ya opened ya eyes and looked,
But I ain't one for bitchin, I just keep em comin,
Droppin hurdles for everyone to fall over but I keep runnin,
Whether it be a battle verse, or battle in tha street,
Ya better call the hurse cos ma styles so unique,
I'll be droppin lines about life, postin about differcult situations,
If you don't like, fine, but I'll keep droppin mine for them minor apprecations,
It ain't for credit that I post, its for self satisfaction,
You wanna credit my flows, go ahead, diss em, expect a reaction,
Cos I take nothing to serious, I feel my flows imperious,
You don't agree well ya must be like Murphy and be delirious,
See, I can deliver rhythm on any level, whether beats or lyrics,
Bringin hype shit to fight wit, whatever beats ya spirits,
So understand I'm a hard hitter, find a keystylish who's whittier,
Never a quiter, I'm gunna stay to make all ya'll feel shittier!

damn, its hot! realy 5 minuets? it flows perfect man

[bez]

yer man, literally 5 mins.  

Nice crit Vito.

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

yer man, literally 5 mins.  

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
 

[·SiNiStEr·]

yer man, literally 5 mins.  

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
 

lol damn bez.. this is the closest thing to a girlfriend you've had in a while.. damn.. good job

[vitodeluca]

ROFL, you a fool sin

[bez]

yer man, literally 5 mins.  

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
 

lol damn bez.. this is the closest thing to a girlfriend you've had in a while.. damn.. good job

you have a small cock...

















...(thinks about the trouble that comment caused last time)

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

ha-ha, sin ur so funny...*kiss ma ass*

[kickz_deluxe]

yer man, literally 5 mins.  

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
 

lol damn bez.. this is the closest thing to a girlfriend you've had in a while.. damn.. good job

i aint here for a long time so could sumeone explain me why u said bez was gay??!

[bez]

yer man, literally 5 mins.  

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
 

lol damn bez.. this is the closest thing to a girlfriend you've had in a while.. damn.. good job

i aint here for a long time so could sumeone explain me why u said bez was gay??!

Nobody did. lol.

I suggest ya read the sentance again.

[kickz_deluxe]

yer man, literally 5 mins.  

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
 

lol damn bez.. this is the closest thing to a girlfriend you've had in a while.. damn.. good job

i aint here for a long time so could sumeone explain me why u said bez was gay??!

Nobody did. lol.

I suggest ya read the sentance again.

damn. sin said that this was the closest thing to a girl u had have in awhile. ok, this doestn say anything, yeah. buuuuuut, therez a battle on audio battel board between u n scit n scit said sumthin bout u was gay n sumthin like this n he mentioned primo. i might have misunderstood everything. whutever, i dont give a fuck bout al this gay shit, ...i`ll never be gay...lol

[bez]

*Lost in what is going on*

[*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc]

*Lost in what is going on*

damn, what youall r talkin about?
bez is a faggot?
shit, i misunderstood scits rhyme 2, kickz!

[bez]

Bez is nuttin of the sort bitches!