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xOvErDozEx

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|*~>Shit Im Facin<~*|
« on: July 02, 2004, 09:27:07 AM »
I Really Sometimes Be Feelin Like My Life Should End
All The Stress That I Be Dealin Wit My Likes And Friends
And I Might Descend And Only Live When Nights Ascend
Coz Rite Now All I Posess Is My Fuckin Mic And Pen
My Parents Spilt Up Ugly, Shit They Still Be Fightin
My Dads Got A Girl Almost My Age My Mom Still Enticin
Plus Rite Now My Aunts In Jail, With No Chance For Bail
The Drug Dealin And Using And She Had Plants For Sale
My Cousin's In Rehab Coz He Cant Control His Bad Habits
Mom Took Away His Drugs Till He Found Out His Dad Had It
Lots Of Fights At The Home Because My Mother's A Drunk
Says She Quit Drinking But Has Wine Smothered In Trunks
The Brothers A Punk, Hes Always Out And Chills Wit Friends
He Gets So Confused How To Stop Drama Maybe Pills Will End
But He Dont Wanna Follow The Footsteps And Do This Weed
And Doesnt Wanna Become Problematic Coz That Dude Is Me
My Father Went To Rehab 3 Times Before He Learned To Stop
The Drinking For Him Was Chronic Like The Birds He Copped
And It Worked Alot, No Longer A Drunk Wit These Conflicts
Maybe My Dad Quit Drinking But My Mother, Shes Constant
Yea Sometimes I Wanna Quit Its Hard To Deal Wit This Crap
Got Nobody To Talk To So I Express My Feelings Through Rap
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xOvErDozEx

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Re: |*~>Shit Im Facin<~*|
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2004, 09:28:01 AM »
Lo0kiN FoR FeeDBacK

ThiS ShiT iS ReaL... No LieZ
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Re: |*~>Shit Im Facin<~*|
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2004, 09:51:51 AM »
i feel the realness. wadnt bad. now if it was strictly bout puttin that into rhymes coulda been better wit rhymin n shit but other than that im feelin it.
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xOvErDozEx

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Re: |*~>Shit Im Facin<~*|
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2004, 10:31:15 AM »
yea i tried to explain the whole situation but using multies too and it worked out kinda well

thanx for the feed back

anymore?
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xOvErDozEx

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Re: |*~>Shit Im Facin<~*|
« Reply #4 on: July 05, 2004, 10:10:58 AM »
Aiiyo Any Feed Back At All?
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Re: |*~>Shit Im Facin<~*|
« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2004, 04:40:42 PM »
tight shit.  Really felt it.
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Re: |*~>Shit Im Facin<~*|
« Reply #6 on: July 09, 2004, 03:32:56 PM »
Thats deep dawg, i think we can all identify wit problems at home... i definitely felt it.
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