Quick Battle Rhyme

[Suffice]

Really wanna challenge me, u don’t stand a chance
You about as dull as the first middle school dance
It’s pathetic that you’re cocky cuz you got fancy attire
Your shit’s becomin old, it should probably retire
You Harmless and weak like a children’s church choir
While I’m wireless, my punches are deeply admired
You’re a liar, plus your pants never cease to be on fire
I decrease your chances of survival like a flat tire
When you speeding on the freeway at a hundred twenty miles
People tell me my rhymes getting phatter like Mariah
At these hard tymes, gotta handle stress like a wire
But it pays off in the end, gonna be on top of the pile
Single handedly send all competition miles away
Started my own style, verses longer than the Nile
It took a while, but nowadays I’m free like Hollidays
Yeah, after I dropped the bar just had to be raised ,
Here to stay,    the lord works mysterious ways
I’m the sharpest in the game, I give the closest shave
MC’s gonna get raped, so I suggest they hide in a cave
Save for labor day, I worked hard for what I craved
I deserve respect, deserve props deserve to get paid
My fanbase is so die hard like they’re john McClain
It’s the Suffice craze, I got balls size of lil wayne
Like lays I got crispy chips on my shoulder
We’re livin in a phase when the world is getting colder
Life is hard, like Sisyphus ya’ll always rolling boulders
No way out, suffice is another the kind of soldier
Consider yourself lucky like Clinton era stockholders
If I pick another cocky wannabe to fuck over

[K-LASH-NEKOFF]

Really wanna challenge me, u don’t stand a chance
You about as dull as the first middle school dance
It’s pathetic that you’re cocky cuz you got fancy attire
Your shit’s becomin old, it should probably retire
You Harmless and weak like a children’s church choir
While I’m wireless, my punches are deeply admired
You’re a liar, plus your pants never cease to be on fire
I decrease your chances of survival like a flat tire
When you speeding on the freeway at a hundred twenty miles
People tell me my rhymes getting phatter like Mariah
At these hard tymes, gotta handle stress like a wire
But it pays off in the end, gonna be on top of the pile
Single handedly send all competition miles away
Started my own style, verses longer than the Nile
It took a while, but nowadays I’m free like Hollidays
Yeah, after I dropped the bar just had to be raised ,
Here to stay,    the lord works mysterious ways
I’m the sharpest in the game, I give the closest shave
MC’s gonna get raped, so I suggest they hide in a cave
Save for labor day, I worked hard for what I craved
I deserve respect, deserve props deserve to get paid
My fanbase is so die hard like they’re john McClain
It’s the Suffice craze, I got balls size of lil wayne
Like lays I got crispy chips on my shoulder
We’re livin in a phase when the world is getting colder
Life is hard, like Sisyphus ya’ll always rolling boulders
No way out, suffice is another the kind of soldier
Consider yourself lucky like Clinton era stockholders
If I pick another cocky wannabe to fuck over

-GOT A REPLY HERE-


Yeah I’m fully prepared to step up to your battle
But u really don’t want any beef here cuz and I ain’t talking about cattle
That means not the beef from a cow, sit down son I’mma show u how
See this battling stuff is all about following a plan
And I am gonna end you fuckin career like bdp did mc shan
Believe me son on da mic stepping to me is like crazy
Your whole rhyming style is whack, weak and lazy
But I heard your rhyme about how ‘mc’s is getting rapped’
Reminds me of the time me and my niggaz run a train on your sista and video taped
But I ain’t goin out like r Kelly son
Believe me after this battle I’m the crowds no1
Everyone in the building screaming and shouting all the way to the back rows
So nigga sit yo’ ass back down and kick the fuckin shadows
Notorious rap nigga but not BIG
But Imma treat him like eazy and findum fuckem and flee
No need for any encore or a rematch kid
Otherwise I might come back wit my nine and wind up on a ten year bid

[bez]

The first verse was actually quite dope, simply flow and technique but I really enjoyed reading it, but it was far from a battle verse.

The second verse was ok, nothing to it though really.  I am guessing it was wrote very quick and without much thought but it was aight.

[K-LASH-NEKOFF]

The first verse was actually quite dope, simply flow and technique but I really enjoyed reading it, but it was far from a battle verse.

The second verse was ok, nothing to it though really.  I am guessing it was wrote very quick and without much thought but it was aight.

yeah i just wrote it as soon as i saw the other one should have taken a bit of time i guess