hard to grow my wings

[hope glimmers]

everday i look around and see everyone happy
every just stares, lookin at me all sappy
they think in broken they think im torn
i may look ragged tired and worn
but im not done, trying to fix things
you know its hard to grow my wings
listenin to contradictions listenin to tales
my heart skips a beat, it never fails
whenever youre near whenever your around
i no longer sleep safe and sound
my dreams are full, full of your face
daydreams consist of remeberin your taste
will it come back will you return
i guess ill find out, how bad will it burn?
to not have you around to not have you near
that my dear, is my greatest fear
but i stand strong, with all that i am
so are you gonna stand up and be a man,
are you gonna tell me whats goin down
in the end am i left with a frown
only you can tell me all of this
till then ill remeber your kiss

i know the rythms and beats arent perfect, just somethin i threw together.  but a wise man once said "Its not the rythms and beats and notes of music that matter, its the heart thought and meaning behind the lyrics, so hear it is...... gimme some feedback

[Dreamz]

*Claps*
Well there was a lot of meaning behind it
it was good
who ever it is about hope they get it
~Props~

[hope glimmers]

thanks, its not as good as others on here,......... "who ever it is about hope they get it" whats that mean?