Author Topic: dont sleep on it  (Read 116 times)

smila

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dont sleep on it
« on: January 12, 2005, 05:15:52 AM »
When i spit my sick scripts quick,it sounds savage
So ima make everyone know i sonned you like proud parents
Im a town hazard like when funnel clouds gather
And start spinnin around faster then the rings found around saturn

Then leave a town battered,and shattered after the disaster
Im a supernatural rapper,that attacks herbs and haters
With a pack or heard of endangered races i learned to cater
And we can capture the worlds surface later,and split it like earths equator
You cant get my pencil off a paper like you had the worst eraser
My teachers think i might hurt the first graders,cuz all the pens i touch turns to tazors
And fuck gettin paper cuts cuz my paper plane tips can leave ya brain split
Some strange chick whos asian kept trainin me in makin blank pages to serrated razors

I got mc's makin more runs then football stars on constipation medication when playin
My heads brain is achin from takin agents that left me in a daze sedated
My pens brain is a maze ment,to lead men to amazement,its enigmatic
Cuz people sleep on my flow like a kid that pissed on plastic wrap attached to his matress
 

bez

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Re: dont sleep on it
« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2005, 05:19:00 AM »
Not mate bad not bad.  Liked your other shit better but that was still nice.

Wasnt very overkeen on the rings around saturn bar and this:

Cuz people sleep on my flow like a kid that pissed on plastic wrap attached to his matress

Just seems forced IMO, but still a nice drop, stay up playa.
 

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Re: dont sleep on it
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2005, 05:22:02 AM »
thats good man...

Do u just practice writing and eventually u can rhyme like that?

I wouldnt know where to start.
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