unsure (done i think)

[hope glimmers]

never in a million did i expect it to happen, no longer us
but theres this new guy, always making a fuss
over me and our plans, that we make all the time
on the phone till 3 could this be a sign
that he really cares, hes always theres helpin with whatever
you ask i did i try to ruin us... never
it happened and i dont know what to say
but tomorrow, tomorrows a brighter day
its not like we were together, thats your fault
you had your chances, plenty.. .here i exalt
i tried to hold on, maybe thats what went wrong
holdin on to air aint easy neither is writin this song
but iwant you to know that i still care
and in the end ill always be there
helpin you out, just call, if your brave
live your life, dont put me in save

we can still be friends
over backwards id bend
to help in time of need
so this is my creed
ill always be here
so have no fear
even though hes still around
and new love i have found
i will always remember
my heart like an ember
its still there, just a bit altered
our time i always adored
and still do, that wont change
our friendship, like mange

things change its a part of life
you didnt cause that much pain and strife
you were there when i needed you the most
for that, thanks now heres your dose
reality hit ive been diagnosed
with pain heartbreak
cant take no more fake
so here i go out the door
but you i still adore
even though i felt ignored
felt like i was a chore
to you, taking your time
so this is the end of my rhyme

[Jimmy Cash2120]

damn, i could feel that. this piece has alot of emotion. i'd like to see it finished, i really like it so far

[bez]

Yer man, keep it coming.

I'm on some shit like that too.  Girls cant live with em cant live without em.

[hope glimmers]

thanks guys, ill try and write more another time, been kinda busy lately

[hope glimmers]

ok east coast g finally done!!  and by the way ... i AM a girl, and you can learn to live with them