A BRIEF CRITIQUE EAST COAST/WEST COAST CHIN CHECC REAL SPIT

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CHECC THIS SONG OUT,SHIT IS REAL NETWORTH,ANYBODY THAT SAY OTHERWIZE IS A LYING SACC OF SHIT NETWORTH,TRUE HIP HOP HEADS LISTEN CLOSELY MUCH LOVE TO DUBCNN YELL

www.soundclick.com/cruelintent           A BRIEF CRITIQUE, GOT A ALCAPPELA ON THERE TO FO ANYBODY THAT WANNA REMIX IT,IT'S ALL LOVE YELL

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ayo i check ya site out, listened to a few songs

brief critique, is kool, speaking ya mind on that, good shit dawg
keep skrillin is ok, rhymes is aight, beat was real hard tho
focus to be the dopest is some straight west coast shit, feeling that
its so sicc is bangin! straight up bumped that! dope shit
da man da myth is different, which is good, guy sounds like ODB, dope dope
follow me is smooth, real long beech shit, slow riding shit,
''Allahs my protector, Allahs my GOD so sit back and relax and enjoy the ride''<thats some real talk, good shit dawg
hellbound is got a dark vibe to it, kool shit, real hard too

ayo im feeling the fact yall come got a whole lot of diff styles, ya spit on some dark shit, some west coast shit, some smooth shit, some different shit its all gooooooddd!
holla back and ayo if ya down we can do some work on collabs n shit man
paz

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I'M With that,and good looking out on the songs,shit is crazy that you know that was some long beach shit tho haha,cause my nigga nyne on that song stayed in the beach at that time, yell

[A_X_E]

nodoubt dawg
aight if you wanna get some collabs cracking hit me up at A_03_M@hotmail.com
we can work some shit out
paz!