Author Topic: "Food For Thought"  (Read 178 times)

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"Food For Thought"
« on: April 28, 2005, 03:03:13 PM »
[size=08pt]Food For Thought, open your Mind & Think
let these words soak in every Time You Blink
read up & listen good, this ain't your Typical
lyrically, it's Critical for me to stay this Pivotal

foo's talkin' about "L.A. gang shit", but they Never Lived It
so now it's time for me to step in & Get Specific
how can people speak on somethin' they know Nothin' About?
that's a good way to get a fist or dick Shoved In Your Mouth
some tortured souls are truly stuck in a Rough Reality
but most just front & bluff like they got "Tough" Mentalities
every1 talks 'bout clothes, ice, cars, Guns & Drugs
actin' like dudes knew some gangsters or Hung w/ Thugs
but let's all be honest, be real & just Come Clean
like crickets, some make noise but stay Unseen
I'm only being truthful, so "digest" whatever's "Edible"
these days, I guess being "ghetto" makes you more 'Credible'
I grew up around fiends & dealers, Violent & Gritty
drive by's almost everynight, trust me, the Site Isn't Pretty
some people end up in the river or Slain In Alleys
the 'hardest of the hard' might not last a Day In Cali
I lost friends to shootings, that's not somethin' to "Glorify"
bystandards fall victim to bullets flyin' through Doors & Die
I was raised in poverty, does that give me "Braggin' Rights"?
seeing death so much made me grateful I even Have A Life

Food For Thought, open your Mind & Think
let these words soak in every Time You Blink
read up & listen good, this ain't your Typical
lyrically, it's Critical for me to stay this Pivotal[/size]
 

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Re: "Food For Thought"
« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2005, 04:09:28 PM »
i think it was quite good, flowed well mostly, few fillers that i didnt like as they didnt fit i dont think, but overall a rly good piece n im feelin wot ya sayin in it, i h8 ppl sayin they gangsta n ghetto when they aint, jus coz guys lyk 50 etc promote that image, good work tho man (Y)
 

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"Food For Thought"
« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2005, 04:39:54 PM »
i think it was quite good, flowed well mostly, few fillers that i didnt like as they didnt fit i dont think, but overall a rly good piece n im feelin wot ya sayin in it, i h8 ppl sayin they gangsta n ghetto when they aint, jus coz guys lyk 50 etc promote that image, good work tho man (Y)

[size=08pt]I appreciate the feedback. Props on the breakdown, this was an older piece of mine, but I got 2 other drops if you wanna check 'em out. I think they vary in substance, for whatever you may be into. Don't Sleep! Uppin'*[/size]
 

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Re: "Food For Thought"
« Reply #3 on: May 02, 2005, 10:24:57 AM »
ya im really feelin yo style.. all your raps flow and arent bout tha typical and i love that
 

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"Food For Thought"
« Reply #4 on: May 02, 2005, 12:28:06 PM »
ya im really feelin yo style.. all your raps flow and arent bout tha typical and i love that

[size=08pt]Thanks for the props, homie. I'm always grateful & appreciative of any positive feedback. I thought my shit was gonna keep on gettin' slept on cuz I get no replies even though I check other people's work, but I'll still keep it comin' - Uppin'*[/size]