Author Topic: Taken Over (Read 100 times)

J Bananas · « **on:** April 29, 2005, 01:42:28 AM »

You aint sayin shit to me cuzzin you cant learn me
Your whole IQ level I done learned in my first week
Every single top 40 rapper but jada and jay z
I got 4 words for ya fuck you pay me
you aint that crazy I asked your lady
she sucked my dick in your g class mercedes
most a you werent sellin crack in the eighties
or hangin with the gangbangers aint nuttin shady,
and in just 8 lines youre whole flow became mine,
then again anyone can recycle the same rhymes
the rap show and tell, 9 outta ten rappers flow real well,
and aint sayin shit like Ali and Cosell, during interviews
and everybody in their crews act like they gettin dues
but really they just there for the image gettin used,
in the background actin like they can abuse,
like the FBI is above plantin .22's,
and aint sayin rappers kill just in time to make the news,
I said in my first rhyme earlier this week
be careful how you handlin your freedoms of speech
now this CIA fag is writin sayin cuz my jeep
has got onstar in it the feds know where i sleep,
it's the end of my first week back get raped sober
and hate me its J Bananas forum take over

DiSSENT · « **Reply #1 on:** April 29, 2005, 08:03:41 AM »

[size=08pt]Good rhymes, pattern & overall flow. I liked what you had to say as well, which in my opinion, made this verse perfectly balanced. Dope/Real shit, homes. Keep it up - Peace*[/size]