Author Topic: "Proper" (30 Bars)  (Read 191 times)

DiSSENT

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"Proper" (30 Bars)
« on: May 06, 2005, 04:25:50 PM »
[size=08pt]I'm Revealin' Some Depth, best believe it's as Real As It Gets
I'm Dealin' w/ Death & when I bust, you can Feel The Effects
of my Crazy Design, all the way to my Grave, I'ma Rhyme
and I keep that State Of A Mind when Creatin' These Lines
I won't Fake To Get Shine, though I am on the Paper Chase
I got no time to Waste In Haste, steareotypes? I Break All Traits
Mentally, I travel through plains, but Not Of This Earth Though
it goes way beyond Burroughs, it's so Complex & Thourough
no need for an Introduction because I'm comin' w/ Substance
make your own Deductions, I see others rap w/ Reluctance
I Embraced This Shit Quick, but wack foo's are Makin' It Big
while I'm Evadin' The Pigs & stayin' true to the Way That I Live
it's Amazingly Sick, blatantly, that's how the Business Is
it's Sadistic Pricks Twistin' This w/ pure, raw, uncut Viciousness
I rep West Coast like Those 'Choppers', a pure Flow Dropper
comin' So 'Proper', some may deem me a 'Show Stopper'
so eat your heart-out, and your gray Matter, Like Hannibal
I Attack Like An Animal, my words in Battles Are Flammable
most MC's these days are Frauds, yeah, str8-up Phasaudes
I go against all Odds & speak up for all of the Underdawgs
hopin' to God I'm Doin' This Right because my Music's My Life
Refusin' All Hype, not your Usual Type, I bring Useful Insight
strong to the bone, to Gain Leverage, milk's my Main Beverage
performing & recording until I catch a Brain Hemorhage
I'm an Essentialist, matter of fact, I'm a super-Naturalist
better than Average, Bitch; who can Catch Up To DiSS?
I'm just lookin' for checks, somewhat like a L.A. Kings Game
like scorpions, I sting & Bring Pain, on the brink of going Insane
I been In Strain & strugglin', but I'm still Thrivin' & Strivin'
I'll probly' die by violence, but for now I'm Survivin' & Ridin'*

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Re: "Proper" (30 Bars)
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2005, 09:54:33 PM »
wow....raw....raw...very raw and very sick..i personally loved it, keep it going..
 

DiSSENT

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"Proper" (30 Bars)
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2005, 08:42:53 AM »
wow....raw....raw...very raw and very sick..i personally loved it, keep it going..

[size=08pt]Very grateful for the great reception. Thanks for taking the time to even read my work - Uppin'*[/size]
 

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Re: "Proper" (30 Bars)
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2005, 10:00:25 AM »
fucking awesome. 
 

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Re: "Proper" (30 Bars)
« Reply #4 on: May 07, 2005, 01:11:35 PM »
very nice homie
 

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"Proper" (30 Bars)
« Reply #5 on: May 09, 2005, 11:26:33 AM »
[size=08pt]I'm glad you guys felt what I got to say, I'm always gratfeful for any feedback. Thanks - Uppin'*[/size]