"Lost Soul" (Keystyle)

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[size=09pt]Ayo, I put the Spark In The Flame & bring Art To The Game
even though I'm Partly Insane & have a Heart Full Of Pain
I'm 1 of the Best In The Biz, so don't Mess With This 'Spic
I Rep Where I Live, the West; most roll w/ Vests & Some Clips
but I'm Deeper Than That, so I remain Speakin' The Facts
Lethal w/ Raps, on or off wax, sportin' Sneakers & Caps
always rockin' some Nike, sportin' a baggy White T
to put it Nicely, I'm takin' "direction", like 'Spike Lee'
so, I Might Be Slightly Crazy, kind of like Slim Shady
just Maybe...what would Pun say? (Probly') "Yeeeah Baby!"
ok then, Hip Hop Is Mine, so I'ma just Drop These Lines
to form some Hot-Ass Rhymes, but don't try to Block My Shine
cuz I rarely Stay Sober & I'm bound to "Take Over"
Lost Soul - a Str8 Soldier, I "Trust No1", but Ain't 'Mulder'
here to Subdue The Scene, huge crowds, I make Move & Scream
at times, Too Extreme, like Freddy, I slay Foo's In Dreams
so Who's To Fear? my phrases are "tighter" than 'Scooba Gear'
my Views Are Clear, cuz I've only grown wiser Through The Years
I can't & Won't Quit, I'm compelled to just Flow Sick
No Tricks involved, I'm bringin' this bonafied Dope Shit*[/size]

[K0NfUzIoN]

9/10

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this was a hot flow...ur stuff always tends to flow very smoothly

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[size=08pt]Damn, thanks, guys! I love getting feedback from fellow MC's...that tells me I'm doing something right. Let me know what I could be doing better? Uppin'*[/size]