Author Topic: wutchu think?  (Read 105 times)

K0NfUzIoN

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wutchu think?
« on: June 09, 2005, 04:33:55 PM »
I speak whats on my mind wit verbal persistence
I struggle to surpass other emcees in every instance
Despite resistance, I bounce back like an inflatable clown
Spit a memorable verse with a relatable sound
I sit and meditate on the thoughts that dwell in my dome
Try to tell what ive known, and propel from my zone
Rebel and im gone, works done, the seed has been sown
Ambitions stacked high like ice cream on a cone
Dream of my own wax, critically acclaimed
Platinum plaques, up on my wall and tastefully framed
New to the game, an amateur to recreational writtens
Battle me on stage, im down for confrontational spittin
Lyrical artistry I aim for, if its wack why deny it
Ask me for something better and ill try to supply it.
 

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wutchu think?
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2005, 08:47:17 AM »
I think this shit was off the hook. Personally, I could identify w/ what you were saying, as both a fan and as a MC. Keep doing your thing, it's always cool reading your work cuz you rhyme sick & your multi's are on point, as well as your flow. Stay up, Kon - Peace*
 

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Re: wutchu think?
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2005, 03:03:32 PM »
thanks.. i really appreciate opinions of ppl i kno have talent