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Mr. O

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alone.
« on: August 03, 2005, 05:31:34 PM »
I wonder, is there a time when many fear it?
The truth from the dead awakens inside the child's spirit.
It's sad to see a youth with the broken truth,
couldn't bare it, so he drop from highschool.
His daily life with the daily drug,
daily alochol that lead him to defy love.
So, where is God when he needs him?
With the all spiritual food that he feeds him?
To bare with society's while holding fool's pride,
he seeks death, rebellin' life in front of lord's eye.
He couldn't take it any more,
his body shivers as his face became very sore.
As he sleeps in bed, death hollas at him
looking pale as a ghost to burn in firery of sin.
The child ran in fear, with no tear,
his evil took him quicky, there's no pain to bare.
It was bondage of agony,
drink his life away till he lost his sanity.
As we look back on our own,
we should ask ourselves what it means to be alone...

« Last Edit: August 05, 2005, 02:28:27 PM by pc8381 »
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Re: alone.
« Reply #1 on: August 03, 2005, 07:19:47 PM »
yo man felt ya on that that was deep
 

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Re: alone.
« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2005, 10:16:02 PM »
Thanks G
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Re: alone.
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2005, 02:34:12 PM »
uppin
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Re: alone.
« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2005, 08:20:19 PM »
smooth flow, deep lyrics, good work  :D
 

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Re: alone.
« Reply #5 on: August 05, 2005, 10:18:57 PM »
smooth flow, deep lyrics, good work  :D
thx brotha!
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Re: alone.
« Reply #6 on: August 05, 2005, 10:24:30 PM »
it sucks...

rap about smokeing weed or fuckin some bitches or get gangsta with it

but even then i prolly still wouldnt read it ;D
 

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Re: alone.
« Reply #7 on: August 05, 2005, 10:29:07 PM »
it sucks...

rap about smokeing weed or fuckin some bitches or get gangsta with it

but even then i prolly still wouldnt read it ;D
Thanks for checkin' it out though homie.
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Re: alone.
« Reply #8 on: August 06, 2005, 02:17:14 PM »
that was nicely put together keep it up.
 

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Re: alone.
« Reply #9 on: August 06, 2005, 03:56:17 PM »
that was nicely put together keep it up.
much luv to ya homie..
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Re: alone.
« Reply #10 on: August 17, 2005, 08:06:15 AM »
Deeper than the sunami.  Good shit!
 

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Re: alone.
« Reply #11 on: August 17, 2005, 10:27:46 AM »
Deeper than the sunami.  Good shit!
lol...thx homie.
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Re: alone.
« Reply #12 on: August 18, 2005, 01:42:42 PM »
very nice sounds personal though,might want to watch that..........but very nice
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