New beat (im working on)......

[Oklin]

.....here is a new beat im working on... i think its turning in to one of my best beats....

im very bad at "not finishing beats".... when im at a point where im not really sure what to do i start a new beat  hehe..

anyway... check it out... leave some feedback..

http://s56.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1TVIAB86NB5JD3VDMPNI04QR6A

[Oklin]

http://s59.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3257UQZFORP9Q36ISIJ1C09IQ6

i made the drums harder and better... and removed a little of the guitar.... thanks to T-Ful for some advice...

[Larrabee]

Dope work, Oklin.

[Oklin]

Dope work, Oklin.

thanks.! 

[Oklin]

here are a new "version" of it... with chorus n shit..

http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1FBE3Y7OC43G52WRU53AYRMIV2

['Illicit']

not my type of beat, but it sounds good, chorus sounds dope too. 

[BOX5 the best poster on this site yell]

BEAT IS IGHT KEEP DOIN YO THANG YELL

[TraceOneInfinite]

beat is tight, I want to do a song over it, sounds like Islamic Spain to me.  Peace.

[Oklin]

beat is tight, I want to do a song over it, sounds like Islamic Spain to me.  Peace.

thanks..

i guess we could work something out... but the beat aint done.... are you a singer or rapper?

[TraceOneInfinite]

beat is tight, I want to do a song over it, sounds like Islamic Spain to me.  Peace.

thanks..

i guess we could work something out... but the beat aint done.... are you a singer or rapper?

I'm really just a freestyler, but I got a friend who is a singer/rapper, so we were freestylin over your beat in the car the other day and we actually came up with something that resembled a song, so we wanted to get on acid pro and put it down.

[Oklin]

beat is tight, I want to do a song over it, sounds like Islamic Spain to me.  Peace.

thanks..

i guess we could work something out... but the beat aint done.... are you a singer or rapper?

I'm really just a freestyler, but I got a friend who is a singer/rapper, so we were freestylin over your beat in the car the other day and we actually came up with something that resembled a song, so we wanted to get on acid pro and put it down.

okay sounds cool... do you rap in english or islamish or what its called... you are an islamer right?... sorry if thats not what you call it hehe .... can i hear something with you?.... im really positive about the idea.... but i think i wanna work a little more on the beat....

[TraceOneInfinite]

beat is tight, I want to do a song over it, sounds like Islamic Spain to me.  Peace.

thanks..

i guess we could work something out... but the beat aint done.... are you a singer or rapper?

I'm really just a freestyler, but I got a friend who is a singer/rapper, so we were freestylin over your beat in the car the other day and we actually came up with something that resembled a song, so we wanted to get on acid pro and put it down.

okay sounds cool... do you rap in english or islamish or what its called... you are an islamer right?... sorry if thats not what you call it hehe .... can i hear something with you?.... im really positive about the idea.... but i think i wanna work a little more on the beat....

I'm just a regular English speaking white dude in America, the only difference is I converted to Islam 5 years ago.  My partner is from Nigeria, but he's been in America so long he doesn't have an accent or anything. 

I'm telling you man, I'm not a rapper, I just like to freestyle.  My friend and I were just freestylin over your beat.  He can sing and everything so we came up with a chorus and it actually ended up being pretty tight.  So we got on acid pro and it's sounding pretty good.  We have to make another revision and then I'll let you hear it.  I think your going to be suprised. 

[Oklin]

beat is tight, I want to do a song over it, sounds like Islamic Spain to me.  Peace.

thanks..

i guess we could work something out... but the beat aint done.... are you a singer or rapper?

I'm really just a freestyler, but I got a friend who is a singer/rapper, so we were freestylin over your beat in the car the other day and we actually came up with something that resembled a song, so we wanted to get on acid pro and put it down.

okay sounds cool... do you rap in english or islamish or what its called... you are an islamer right?... sorry if thats not what you call it hehe .... can i hear something with you?.... im really positive about the idea.... but i think i wanna work a little more on the beat....

I'm just a regular English speaking white dude in America, the only difference is I converted to Islam 5 years ago.  My partner is from Nigeria, but he's been in America so long he doesn't have an accent or anything. 

I'm telling you man, I'm not a rapper, I just like to freestyle.  My friend and I were just freestylin over your beat.  He can sing and everything so we came up with a chorus and it actually ended up being pretty tight.  So we got on acid pro and it's sounding pretty good.  We have to make another revision and then I'll let you hear it.  I think your going to be suprised. 

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okay...

[Oklin]

beat is tight, I want to do a song over it, sounds like Islamic Spain to me.  Peace.

thanks..

i guess we could work something out... but the beat aint done.... are you a singer or rapper?

I'm really just a freestyler, but I got a friend who is a singer/rapper, so we were freestylin over your beat in the car the other day and we actually came up with something that resembled a song, so we wanted to get on acid pro and put it down.

okay sounds cool... do you rap in english or islamish or what its called... you are an islamer right?... sorry if thats not what you call it hehe .... can i hear something with you?.... im really positive about the idea.... but i think i wanna work a little more on the beat....

I'm just a regular English speaking white dude in America, the only difference is I converted to Islam 5 years ago.  My partner is from Nigeria, but he's been in America so long he doesn't have an accent or anything. 

I'm telling you man, I'm not a rapper, I just like to freestyle.  My friend and I were just freestylin over your beat.  He can sing and everything so we came up with a chorus and it actually ended up being pretty tight.  So we got on acid pro and it's sounding pretty good.  We have to make another revision and then I'll let you hear it.  I think your going to be suprised. 

i got a newer version btw... imma upload it...

EDIT:
here it is
http://rapidshare.de/files/11652099/Document_31test.mp3.html

EDIT EDIT:
this will be the first time someone spits over a beat of mine... so remember to shout me out! 

[Paul]

well done mayne, sounds like summit kanye west would cum up wit